Monday, 29 July 2019

Peace

From "our moving world" to "peace may be all around us", today we have an English song called Peace, which goes from 2:41 to 3:24 in the linked video. I translated it to Chinese on 12/4/19, though I'm still not sure how to translate "Peace" into a monosyllabic word in Chinese. Quora suggested not a monosyllabic word, but the disyllabic 安宁 | ānníng. So be it then. Change implemented during checkup on 25/8/19. At 19:27 on 29/9/21, the line 安宁它在心的地方 takes the form 安宁它就在心房 and then the current form.
On recording day, aka 4/4/25, at 14:[34:15,45:05] I think 但它却还是难找到 isn't very good with that hai shi before adjective, so I change the shi to 很, then 可, then I settle for 好. At 14:45:05 I decide to change 安宁在心在的地方, since the two-syllable anning gives me an extra note anywhere else and this line as is sounds like "Peace is in a new place", not "in the heart's place". Well I just realized I read it as 安宁在心的地方, missing the second zài, but I keep the change anyway :). And then, 18/5/25 13:39, I try to be less literal with 安宁就跟内心一起, changing 就->总 24/5/25 20:00. Let's see!


Peace
It keeps the world together
Without it
The world would fall apart
Peace
Sometimes it's hard to find
But all you have to do
Is look inside your heart

Peace is where the heart is
It isn't just inside our minds
Peace may be all around us
And yet it is still hard to find
安宁
叫世界继续团结
没有它
世界快会崩溃
安宁
有时它难找到
但你所得做的
就是看在心內

安宁在内心的地方
不但在我们的大脑
安宁可铺满全世界
但它却还好难找到
Ānníng
Jiào shìjiè jìxù tuánjié
Méi yǒu tā
Shìjiè kuài huì bēngkuì
Ānníng
Yǒushí tā nán zhǎodào
Dàn nǐ suǒ děi zuò de
Jiùshì kàn zài xīn nèi

Ānníng zài nèixīn de dìfāng
Bùdàn zài wǒmen de dànǎo
Ānníng kě pū mǎn quán shìjiè
Dàn tā què hái hǎo nán zhǎodào
安宁
叫世界继续团结
没有它
世界快会崩溃
安宁
有时它难找到
但你所得做的
就是看在心內

安宁总跟内心一起
不但在我们的大脑
安宁可铺满全世界
但它却还好难找到
Ānníng
Jiào shìjiè jìxù tuánjié
Méi yǒu tā
Shìjiè kuài huì bēngkuì
Ānníng
Yǒushí tā nán zhǎodào
Dàn nǐ suǒ děi zuò de
Jiùshì kàn zài xīn nèi

Ānníng zǒng gēn nèixīn yīqǐ
Bùdàn zài wǒmen de dànǎo
Ānníng kě pū mǎn quán shìjiè
Dàn tā què hái hǎo nán zhǎodào

Saturday, 27 July 2019

Our moving world

Speaking of The world has never stopped for a second (quote last post's song), we have two songs about the ever-moving nature of our world, one in Mandarin, and one in Min Nan.
The former is 潇洒走一回 | Xiǎosǎ zǒu yī huí, "Live an unrestrained life", and I met it «around Christmas or sometime after it, probably at lest before Easter» in 2012, and translated it to English way later on Jun 18 2018 (originally «The mortal world surges, / Madness and deep love / Unite and break apart.», then changes «Join and break apart» and «Years don't know how filled with / Sadness the world is»), with three lines being edited on Jun 25 («As our world surges, / Mad and deep love, / Meetings and breakups will take place.»), Jul 3 («Our world keeps churning / Mad love and deep feelings, / Meetings and breakups will take place., and Jul 27 (current version, except for the second change mentioned above, which is still there in the note, but wasn't implemented here), where the error came to my mind after seeing Anton Xie's Hakka version, which will be reported in this post by the way. That version dates to sometime in 2018 before Jun 25, or so suggests his «version 2018» before the song lyrics.
The Min song is 飘浪的海沙 | Phiau-lōng ê hái-sua, "Sand floating on the waves", I met it sometime between Jun 22 and mid-July 2013, and translated it to English way later on Jun 20 2018 with a tweak on Jul 11, and to Czech on Jul 9 2018, in the original version below. Sep 10 2018 15:52 I got corrections:
  • "Jsme zrnka písku, které se kutálí ve vlnách/s vlnami" (l. 1);
  • "Svět se nezastaví" (l. 3 and 12);
  • "Nikdy se nezastaví" (not sure what line that was about; perhaps combined with the previous to "Svět nikdy se nezastavi"?);
  • Ah život: musí vždy spěchat (l. 6, the first of the chorus);
  • pokud/když se otočíme, za námi jen věje vítr (the next line);
  • Typo živost -> život.
I metabolized them at 17:14:
  • Number 1 got rejected and the second half of the line becomes «ve vlnami koulí»; it's due to literally translating the English;
  • Second one is accepted;
  • Third one is rejected on musical grounds;
  • Fourth one is accepted;
  • Fifth one is rejected on musical grounds with suggestion «Se otočíme a je nic než věje vítr»;
  • Last one is accepted, of course.
Sep 22 I got replies to the comments on the corrections, insisting on 1 (7:54) and changing the suggestion for 5 to «Když se otočíme není tam jic, než vítr, který věje» (7:58). I keep my idea, fixing it to «se kutálí s vlnach» at 16:14 and to «se kutálí ve vlnach» at 16:15. As for 5, I opt for «Se otočíme, a není nic než věje vítr» (16:30), which gets us the present version. Let's see them songs!


*天地悠悠过客匆匆
潮起又潮落
恩恩怨怨生死白头
几人能看透
#红尘呀滚滚
痴痴呀情深
聚散终有时
留一半清醒
留一半醉
至少梦里有你追随
我拿青春睹明天
你用真情换此生
岁月不知人间
多少的忧伤
何不潇洒走一回







岁月不知人间
多少的忧伤
何不潇洒走一回



*天地悠悠路人匆匆
又潮落
恩恩怨怨生死白头
么人能看透
#红尘呀滚滚
狂狂深情
分合总有时
留一半真身
留一半醉
最少梦追随
拿青春赌明天
用真情教人生
岁月知人间
多少趜伤忧伤
何不潇洒一回







岁月知人间
多少趜伤忧伤
何不潇洒一回
* Tiāndì yōuyōu guòkè cōngcōng
Cháo qǐ yòu cháo luò
Ēnēnyuànyuàn shēngsǐ báitóu
Jǐ rén néng kàntòu
# Hóngchén ya gǔngǔn
Chīchī ya qíng shēn
Jù sàn zhōng yǒu shí
Liú yī bàn qīngxǐng
Liú yī bàn zuì
Zhìshǎo mèng li yǒu nǐ zhuīsuí
Wǒ ná qīngchūn dǔ míngtiān
Nǐ yòng zhēnqíng huàn cǐshēng
Suìyuè bù zhī rénjiān
Duōshǎo de yōushāng
Hébù xiāosǎ zǒu yī huí

*

#

#

Suìyuè bùzhī rénjiān
Duōshǎo de yōushāng
Hébù xiāosǎ zǒu yī huí



* Thien-thì yîu-yîu lù-nyîn tshung-tshung
Châu hòng yìu châu lȯk
En-en-yèn-yèn sang-sí phȧk-thêu
Mài-nyîn nên khòn-thèu
# Fûng-chîn yâ khún-khún
Không-không kài chim tshîn
Pun hȧp tsúng yìu-shî
Lîu yit pàn cin-shin
Lîu yit pàn tsùi
Tsùi-sháu mùng tú yìu nyî tui-sûi
Ngâi nȧk tshiang-chun tú mîn-thien
Nyî yùng cin-tshîn kàu nyîn-sen
Sòi-nyėt m ti nyîn-kien
To-sháu kài kiu̇k-shong
Hô-put siau-sá hâng yıt fûi

*

#

#

Sòi-nyėt m ti nyîn-kan
To-sháu kài kiu̇k-shong
Hô-put siau-sá hâng yıt fûi



People hurry in this age-old world
Tides do rise and fall
Grudges, gratitudes, life, death, old age:
How many understand?
As our world’s churning
Mad love and deep love,
There’ll be meetings and breakups.
I'm left half clear-minded,
I'm left half drunk,
But at least I have you in my dreams.
In my youth, I watch my future,
You trade true feelings with this life,
Years don't know the sadness
That fills all people:
Why not just live unrestrained?





一粒海沙      着海水滚绞滚动
有时海底      有时靠岸
世事无常
苦海波浪重重叠叠
浮浮沉沉起落无定

副歌:
啊~人生      奔波走傱忙碌的命
越头过去      风吹
啊~世间      不过短短一
越头看      亲像就像漂浪的海沙

一粒海沙      拖来磨去的命
有时      有时破碎啊
世事无常
繁华落魄停止
终尾也是万缘放下

副歌

副歌



We're grains of sand      turning over in the sea
Sometimes far-off,      sometimes on the shore
Our world always moves:
Waves of pain get over each other,
We drift and randomly raise and fall down

Chorus:
Ah, our life      bound to hurry wildly
Turning back      there’s naught but blowing wind
Ah, our world      is a short short bit of road
Turning back      we're like sand floating on the waves.

We’re grains of sand      getting dragged and consumed
Sometimes jaggèd,      sometimes more smooth
Our world always moves:
Good and bad feelings all will end,
In the end you will put down all your bonds.

Chorus

Chorus
Tsi̍t lia̍p hái-sua      tuè-tio̍h hái-tsuí kún-ká
Ū-sî hái té      ū-sî khò-huānn
Sè-sū bû-siông
Khóo-hái pho-lōng tîng-tîng-tha̍h-tha̍h
Phû-phû-tîm-tîm khí-lo̍h bô-tiānn

Hù-kua:
Ah… lîn-sing      phun-pho tsáu-tsông--ê miā
Ua̍t-thâu kuè-khì      hong tshue bô-iânn
Ah… sè-kan      put-kò té-té tsi̍t tsuā
Ua̍t-thâu khuànn      tshin-tshiūnn phiau-lōng--ê hái-sua

Tsi̍t lia̍p hái-sua      thua lâi buā khì--ê miā
Ū-sî lú suí      ū-sî phò-tshuì--ah
Sè-sū bû-siông
Huân-huâ lo̍k-phik lóng ē suah
Tsiong-bué iā sī bān iân hòng-hā

Hù-kua

Hù-kua
Zrnko písku      spolu s vlnami koulí
Někdy v oblivu,      někdy v pláži
Svět ne zastaví
Vlny smutku překrývají se
Nahoru a dolů, nikdy zastavají

Refrén:
Ah... život:      jstě vždy spěcháme,
Pokud se otočíme      je pouze věje vítr
Ah..., svět náš      ačkoli je cesta velmi krátká,
My plujeme      vždy jako písek na vlnách.

Zrnko písku      je taženo a vyčerpáno
Někdy krásné,      někdy rozbité.
Svět ne zastaví:
Živost a frustrace skončí
V konci uložíme každý vztah

Refrén

Refrén
Zrnko písku      se kutálí ve vlnách
Někdy v oblivu,      někdy v pláži
Svět se nezastaví
Vlny smutku překrývají se
Nahoru a dolů, nikdy zastavají

Refrén:
Ah... život:      musí vždy spěchat,
Se otočíme      a není nic než věje vítr
Ah..., svět náš      ačkoli je cesta velmi krátká,
My plujeme      vždy jako písek na vlnách.

Zrnko písku      je taženo a vyčerpáno
Někdy krásné,      někdy rozbité.
Svět se nezastaví:
Život a frustrace skončí
V konci uložíme každý vztah

Refrén

Refrén

Monday, 22 July 2019

Il mondo

Anche oggi una canzone Italiana, scollegata da quella di prima, ma si lega al post dopo. È Il mondo, tradotta in Cinese il 27/9/15. Questa viene metà da una nota metà da una seconda, entrambe hanno quella data. C'è una sola differenza tra le note e la versione sotto: 坏境->环境, correzione di non so quando. Vediamo!


No,
Stanotte amore
Non ho più pensato a te
Ho aperto gli occhi
Per guardare intorno a me
E intorno a me
Girava il mondo come sempre

Gira, il mondo gira
Nello spazio senza fine
Con gli amori appena nati
Con gli amori già finiti
Con la gioia e col dolore
Della gente come me

Un mondo
Soltanto adesso, io ti guardo
Nel tuo silenzio io mi perdo
E sono niente accanto a te

Il mondo
Non si é fermato mai un momento
La notte insegue sempre il giorno
Ed il giorno verrà
Oh mondo!



没,
哦亲爱我今夜
再没有想到你,
我开了眼睛
而看到我的环境,
在环境
世界还像总是一样转着。

转着,世界转着,
在无边无际的空间,
跟刚刚出生的恋爱,
跟已经结束的恋爱,
跟和我一样的人们
的快乐和悲伤啊。

个世界,
我现在才开始看到你,
在你的沉默我来迷路,
在你旁边不是什么。

这世界
每一刻也都没有停止,
夜间总是在追求白天,
而且白天要来!
Méi,
Ó qīn'ài wǒ jīnyè
Zài méi yǒu xiǎngdào nǐ,
Wǒ kāile yǎnjīng
Ér kàn dào wǒ de huánjìng,
Zài huánjìng
Shìjiè hái xiàng zǒng shì yīyàng zhuǎnzhe.

Zhuǎnzhe, shìjiè zhuǎnzhe,
Zài wúbiān wújì de kōngjiān,
Gēn gānggāng chūshēng de liàn'ài,
Gēn yǐjīng jiéshù de liàn'ài,
Gēn hé wǒ yīyàng de rénmen
De kuàilè he bēishāng a.

Gè shìjiè,
Wǒ xiànzài cái kāishǐ kàn dào nǐ,
Zài nǐ de chénmò wǒ lái mílù,
Zài nǐ pángbiān bù shì shénme.

Zhè shìjiè
Měi yī kè yě dōu méiyǒu tíngzhǐ,
Yèjiān zǒng shì zài zhuīqiú báitiān,
Érqiě báitiān yào lái!

Saturday, 20 July 2019

Un giudice

E anche oggi un isolato. Oggi una canzone di De André, Un giudice, tradotta in Cinese, «traduzione che risale a non più tardi del 29/1/2016, data di ultima modifica di una nota Facebook contenente la traduzione». La cosa è molto più complicata, e quel 29/1/16 dovrebbe essere la data di creazione, visto cosa fa Facebook con altre note, eppure non si trovano screenshot per confermarlo, né il 28, né il 29, né il 30. Comunque la traduzione è di ben prima di quella data. Vediamo un po' quel che abbiamo della storia:
  1. Il 13/3/15 posto su Facebook questo post, e subito lo modifico, cambiando le seguenti cose, dove "V" sta per strofa e "L" per riga:
    1. «也是他们的多笑话,» originale di V1L4;
    2. «人关于矮人说的真正,» originale di V1L10;
    3. «他们是否有最少» originale di V1L11;
    4. «在怨恨电量的那夜晚» originale di V3L2;
    5. «先带你到圣器室» originale di V3L7;
    6. «没说笑话,只说“启禀大人”。» originale di V4L4;
    io continuo ad avere in mente una V1L1 con 高低 in fondo, corretta dal buon Song Feng il 25/6/16, eppure non appare da nessuna parte; che fosse un suggerimento che ho fatto direttamente a lui e lui ha detto meglio di no?
  2. Comunque nella versione finale del post ci sono le seguenti differenze rispetto alla versione sotto, modulo errori di stumpa che ignoro qui come li ho ignorati nel confronto sopra:
    1. 爱人 invece di 矮子 in V1L10, V1L11, V2L7;
    2. 到底 invece di 最终 in V3L10;
  3. Il primo punto viene aggiustato il 25/6/16 (screenshot alla mano), direttamente nella famosa nota (ora eliminata ma l'ho salvata sul computer prima che Facebook me la cancellasse a casso di cane…); dagli screenshot sembrerebbe che le modifiche avvengano in quest'ordine: V2L7 alle 12:52:21 (presumibilmente), V1L10 alle 12:54:07, V1L11 subito dopo;
  4. Il secondo punto è un bel mistero; viene corretto nella nota, ma gli screenshot del 25/6/16 arrivano fino alle 15:35:29 con ancora 到底, e poi la nota sparisce; la bozza di questo post risale al 6/9/18, e in effetti ne vedo la creazione negli screenshot, e alle 15:46:52 si vede quel che pare un copincolla della nota, completo di 最终; quindi abbiamo un intervallo di tempo enorme in cui la modifica può essere avvenuta; non son sicuro se ho guardato gli screenshot del 25/6 oltre alla fine delle modifiche alla nota, magari Song mi ha detto più tardi di far quella modifica? Però lui è venuto per una grigliata, se ben ricordo, una grigliata a pranzo in effetti, quindi a quell'ora là, 15:46, il pranzo era bell'e finito, e se abbandono la nota probabilmente le sue correzioni finiscono lì… a meno che le correzioni siano implementate il 25/6 ma fatte prima, ma i miei ricordi dicono altro, e inoltre la grigliata era di sabato e il 25 era un sabato, vuoi che abbia aspettato ad implementarle una settimana intera? Boh; insomma, quando arriverò a guardare tutti i vecchi screenshot, magari salterà fuori quando ostrega ho fatto questa modifica, o magari addirittura il famoso 高低 di V1L1 che non appare da nessuna parte, ma per adesso "tutto qui".
Vediamo!


Cosa vuol dire avere
Un metro e mezzo di statura,
Ve lo rivelan gli occhi
E le battute della gente,
O la curiosità
Di una ragazza irriverente
Che si avvicina solo
Per un suo dubbio impertinente:
Vuole scoprir se è vero
Quanto si dice intorno ai nani,
Che siano i più forniti
Della virtù meno apparente,
Fra tutte le virtù
La più indecente.

Passano gli anni, i mesi,
E se li conti anche i minuti,
È triste trovarsi adulti
Senza essere cresciuti;
La maldicenza insiste,
Batte la lingua sul tamburo
Fino a dire che un nano
È una carogna di sicuro
Perché ha il cuore toppo,
Troppo vicino al buco del culo.

Fu nelle notti insonni
Vegliate al lume del rancore
Che preparai gli esami.
Diventai procuratore
Per imboccar la strada
Che dalle panche d'una cattedrale
Porta alla sacrestia
Quindi alla cattedra d'un tribunale,
Giudice finalmente,
Arbitro in terra del bene e del male.

E allora la mia statura
Non dispensò più buonumore
A chi alla sbarra in piedi
Mi diceva Vostro Onore,
E di affidarli al boia
Fu un piacere del tutto mio,
Prima di genuflettermi
Nell'ora dell'addio
Non conoscendo affatto
La statura di Dio.



有一米半的高
哎呀这就是什么意思?
就是人们的眼睛,
他们的多笑话来展示,
还有一个轻慢
亵慢的小姐的好奇心,
她的来离你近
只是为某个不逊的怀疑:
她想要发现是否
人关于矮子说得真正,
矮子是否有最少
表观的美德的最大量,
所有的美德中
最非礼的。

年月来过,而如果
你计算,分钟也来过啊。
你发现已经成人,
但是你还没有长大。
而戳脊梁骨坚持,
用他的舌头就来打鼓,
直到人来说矮子
不能不是卑贱的人啊,
因为他的心真的
真的离他的屁眼太近啊。

而我来彻夜不眠,
在怨恨点亮的些夜晚
准备了我的考试,
而变成一个检控官,
我来进入的那路,
从一个大教堂的板凳
先带我到圣器室
再带到法院的那公安:
我最终变成法官,
地球上分别好坏的仲裁人。

那我的高低再没有
给别的人小一点谐趣,
站在条形前的人
向我只说“启禀大人”。
托他们给执行人,
这是全属于我的乐趣,
直到我在告别
的那时候一定要屈服,
并毫不知道
天上的上帝的高低
Yǒu yī mǐ bàn de gāo
Āiyā zhè jiùshì shénme yìsi?
Jiù shì rénmen de yǎnjīng,
Tāmen de duō xiàohuà lái zhǎnshì,
Hái yǒu yī gè qīngmàn
Xièmàn de xiǎojiě de hào qíxīn,
Tā de lái lí nǐ jìn
Zhǐ shì wèi mǒu gè bù xùn de huáiyí:
Tā xiǎngyào fāxiàn shìfǒu
Rén guānyú ǎizi shuō dé zhēnzhèng,
Ǎizi shìfǒu yǒu zuìshǎo
Biǎoguān de měidé de zuì dà liàng,
Suǒyǒu de měidé zhōng
Zuì fēilǐ de.

Nián yuè lái guò, ér rúguǒ
Nǐ jìsuàn, fēnzhōng yě lái guò a.
Nǐ fāxiàn yǐjīng chéngrén,
Dànshì nǐ hái méiyǒu zhǎng dà.
Ér chuōjǐlianggǔ jiānchí,
Yòng tā de shétou jiù lái dǎgǔ,
Zhídào rén lái shuō ǎizi
Bù néng bù shì bēijiàn de rén a,
Yīnwèi tā de xīn zhēn de
Zhēn de lí tā de pìyǎn tài jìn a.

Ér wǒ lái chè yè bù mián,
Zài yuànhèn diǎnliàng de xiē yèwǎn
Zhǔnbèile wǒ de kǎoshì,
Ér biànchéng yī gè jiǎnkòngguān,
Wǒ lái jìnrù de nà lù,
Cóng yī gè dà jiàotáng de bǎndèng
Xiān dài wǒ dào shèngqìshì
Zài dài dào fǎyuàn de nà gōng'ān:
Wǒ zuìzhōng biànchéng fǎguān,
Dìqiú shàng fēnbié hǎo huài de zhòngcáirén.

Nà wǒ de gāodī zài méiyǒu
Gěi bié de rén xiǎo yīdiǎn xiéqù,
Zhàn zài tiáoxíng qián de rén
Xiàng wǒ zhǐ shuō “qǐbǐng dàrén”.
Tuō tāmen gěi zhíxíngrén,
Zhè shì quán shǔyú wǒ de lèqù,
Zhídào wǒ zài gàobié
De nà shíhòu yīdìng yào qūfú,
Bìng háo bù zhīdào
Tiānshàng de shàngdì de gāodī

Tuesday, 16 July 2019

Two children's songs!

After "No smoking", another couple songs with cheerful tunes. These two happen to be children's songs which my mother-tongue teacher introduced to the whole class as per the year 3 list here, they're titled 两只老虎 | Liǎng zhī lǎohǔ | Two tigers and 拔萝卜 | Bá luóbo | Pulling turnips, and you'll almost surely recognize the tune of number 1 :). I translated number 1 on 28/3/19, and number 2 on 29/3, or so I thought, then I found there were extra verses, so on 30/3 I finished the job. Let's see them!


两只老虎
两只老虎
跑得快
跑得快
一只没有耳朵/眼睛
一只没有尾巴
真奇怪
真奇怪
Liǎng zhī lǎohǔ
Liǎng zhī lǎohǔ
Pǎo dé kuài
Pǎo dé kuài
Yī zhǐ méiyǒu ěrduǒ/yǎnjīng
Yī zhǐ méiyǒu wěibā
Zhēn qíguài
Zhēn qíguài



Two twin tigers
Two twin tigers
Run with speed
Run with speed
One its ears/eyes is missing
One its tail is missing
Strange indeed
Strange indeed





合唱:
拔萝卜拔萝卜
哎呀呀哎呀呀
哎呀哎呀
拔不动

老公公快点来
快来帮我们把萝卜
老公公快点来!
来了,来了

合唱

老婆婆快点来
快来帮我们把萝卜
老婆婆快点来!
来了,来了

合唱

小花狗快点来
快来帮我们把萝卜
小花狗快点来!
注,注,来了,来了

合唱

小花猫快点来
快来帮我们把萝卜
小花猫快点来!
喵 喵 我来了,我来了

合唱

小老鼠快点来
快来帮我们把萝卜
小老鼠快点来!
吱……吱……
我来了,我来了

合唱

大萝卜拔起来
大家一起拔起来
大萝卜拔起来了!
哈……哈……哈……哈……
Héchàng:
Bá luóbo bá luóbo
Āiyāya āiyāya
Āiyā āiyā
Bá bù dòng

Lǎogōnggōng kuài diǎn lái
Kuài lái bāng wǒmen bǎ luóbo
Lǎogōnggōng kuài diǎn lái!
Láile, láile

Héchàng

Lǎopópo kuài diǎn lái
Kuài lái bāng wǒmen bǎ luóbo
Lǎopópo kuài diǎn lái!
Láile, láile

Héchàng

Xiǎo huāgǒu kuài diǎn lái
Kuài lái bāng wǒmen bǎ luóbo
Xiǎo huāgǒu kuài diǎn lái!
Zhù, zhù, láile, láile

Héchàng

Xiǎo huāmāo kuài diǎn lái
Kuài lái bāng wǒmen bǎ luóbo
Xiǎo huāmāo kuài diǎn lái!
Miāo miāo wǒ láile, wǒ láile

Héchàng

Xiǎo lǎoshǔ kuài diǎn lái
Kuài lái bāng wǒmen bǎ luóbo
Xiǎo lǎoshǔ kuài diǎn lái!
Zhī……zhī……
Wǒ láile, wǒ láile

Héchàng

Dà luóbo bá qǐlái
Dàjiā yì qǐ bá qǐlái
Dà luóbo bá qǐláile!
Hā……hā……hā……hā……



Chorus:
Pull the turnip pull the turnip
Heave-uh-ho heave-uh-ho
Heave-ho heave-ho
It won’t move

Grandpa dear quickly come
Quick, come help us to tug the turnip
Grandpa dear quickly come
Coming, coming

Chorus

Grandma dear quickly come
Quick, come help us to tug the turnip
Grandma dear quickly come
Coming, coming

Chorus

Little dog quickly come
Quick, come help us to tug the turnip
Little dog quickly come
Woof, woof, coming, coming

Chorus

Tabby cat quickly come
Quick, come help us to tug the turnip
Tabby cat quickly come
Meow meow I’m coming, I’m coming

Chorus

Little mouse quickly come
Quick, come help us to tug the turnip
Little mouse quickly come
Eek… eek…
I’m coming, I’m coming

Chorus

The big turnip was pulled out
All together we pulled it out
The big turnip was pulled out!
Ha… ha… ha… ha…

Saturday, 13 July 2019

No smoking!

OK, so today we have a funny little song that has no link whatsoever (at least AFAICT) with any other item on this blog. I met this sometime between Easter and Jun 28 2012 [except it first appears in Session 20 from 13/7 and the 12/7 before that doesn't have it], and translated it to English within the summer (during the summer, I think, in August in fact). [To be more precise:
  • I translated it on 13/8/12, as per the famous big intro, and I have the manuscript;
  • The mistranslation below first appears, without ll. 12-13, in a 18/8 20:54 file, while a file from 15:27 on the same day doesn't have it; I'd assume that the changes from the manuscript to the file are made on that date, and they are the addition of l. 11, and «Tea, bear, or smoke to fill my mouþ.» and «A big advertisement says» being changed;
  • The two lines first appear in a file dated 3/9/12 13:25, and since the song appears in a lyrics file dated 25/8/12 10:51, I assume the translation was completed after that date.]
  • My awful Hakka at the time produced the wonderful mistranslation on the left, whereas on the right you find a revised version from ≥15:20 on 6/9/18. On 29/5/21 at 12:24, for the recording, I change «Each man for health will cut off smoke» to the current form. At 15:25, while captioning the video, I realize that, with Zhang Shaolin shaking his hand in front of his nose while singing «Múi-thàu háu không cu-lu̇t-yen», the mui-thau was probably "smell" rather than "taste", so I fix it.
It is a (Huiyang?) Hakka song called 烟仔歌 | Yen-tsái ko, "Cigarette song" (NOT "ash song" as I somehow came to believe), and it is a pretty strong advice to NOT smoke.
Let's see it!


人人也来跟
饭后一支烟
快乐过神仙万千
饱饭烟仔最
啤酒担口烟
市面上多烟
大事宣传广告登
肺病辛苦又会了钱
生CANCER箇阵那么好怨
最怕二手烟
味道好狂猪律烟雪茄烟
大众广场都禁烟
复制三万到处有眼见
人人为健康脱离烟



Ev'ryone says I too will,
Smoking after meals,
Careless, be happy a lot.
I eat my fill with no ash, I don't need
Tea, beer, or cigarettes to smoke.
The market's full of smoke,
One big advertisement says
You'll have tisis and spend money,
Get CANCER, fight, you can't complain.
Fear second-hand smoke.
Smoke has such a violent taste.
Ev'ry one says smoke's a wonder
They will be taken right away
Each man for health will cut off smoke
Nyîn-nyîn kóng ngâi ya lôi ken
Fán hèu yit ki yen
Khuài-lȯk kwò shîn-sien vàn-tshién
Shıt páu fán mâu yen-tsái tsùi m nyèn
Yím tshâ yím phiā-tsíu tam héu-yen
Shì-mièn shòng hè to yen
Thài-sìi sien-chôn kwóng-kàu ten
Phùi-phiàng sin-khú yù vòi liáu tshiên
Sang CANCER kài-chìng m háu yèn
Tsùi phà nyì-shíu-yen
Múi-thàu háu không cu-lu̇t-yen
Thài-cùng kóng-chông tu và kìm yen
Tshau sam vàn tàu-chù yu ngán-kèn
Nyîn-nyîn vùi khèn-khong thot-lî yen



Ev'ryone says I too will,
Smoking after meals,
Careless, be happy a lot.
I eat my fill with no ash, I don't need
Tea, beer, or cigarettes to smoke.
The market's full of smoke,
One big advertisement says
You'll have tisis and spend money,
If you get CANCER, you can't complain.
Fear second-hand smoke.
Cigars have such a violent smell.
"No smoke" signs the whole square cover,
There's billions, they're just everywhere!
You should all quit smoke for your health!

Tuesday, 9 July 2019

Cold sun

Another sorta-kinda love song here, again on the sad side, because repeated wounds are mentioned. A Mandarin song titled 冷冷的太阳 | Lěnglěng de tàiyáng, "Cold cold sun", met sometime between Oct 1 and Dec 9 2011 and translated to English soon after that, oh and to French by the summer, didn't remember that. More specifically:
  • The diary entry for 25/11/11 says «Tum est quod et invenio et verto lěng-lěngde tàiyáng» (It is then that I find and translate Lěnglěng de tàiyáng); now, at that point, I may not have clearly separated "understanding/deciphering" from "translating" in my mind, but this definitely gives a lower bound on when this was translated;
  • The translation was done on 28/11 during English class; this is the below version, save for «You only can give me», the options «Out of the cold corner […]» and «Out of this corner cold of mine» thich then settle on the below «To get out of this corner cold», the alternatives «I have escaped from the darkness» and «I fro the darkness have escaped», which then come to the below «To let me flee out of the dark», the literal «I am like a cold sun» and «I once also had a burning heart» and «But, being continuously wounded», probably for memory, which then get made into their current versions save for «I once also did have a burning heart», and the literal «Melt the heart of the frost.» which doesn't get musicalized (probably because it essentially already can be sung);
  • The first record of the English version is from a 2/12/11 19:45 file devoted to this song, which contains two versions, both identical to the blog version except for the last line, which appears first as «Do melt the heart of frost», and then as «Can melt the heart of frost»;
  • The latter version is also sent to my corrector in a 9/12/11 22:10 email; this is also the version in the 28/7/12 file and on the printout where the French manuscript is found;
  • The reply to said email, on 9/1/12 at 20:57, has exactly zero annotations to this song;
  • The French version, like many others, has a blank space for it in the 5/8/12 19:26 file, and appears manuscripted on the printout of the 28/7/12 file; the manuscript is dated to 25/7/12 by the mega-intro, and is different from the below version in the following lines:
    • «On[t] vu déja [->déja vu] trop d’hypochrites», where we have a misspelled "ont" without a -t, a word switch made within the manuscript via an arrow from one word to the other, and a misspelled final word with an -h- too many;
    • «Personne jamais ne -> m’ai / M'a aimé profondement ainsi / Qu’elle m’a fait sortir des ténèbres», where we have a discarded beginning, then the final version of the first two lines (save for the error "m'ai"), and an actual alternate version of the last line, where "sortir" is changed to "m'enfuir" straight after the line is fully written;
    • «Maint’nant je suis comme 1 soleit tout froid», where "tout" replaces the "très" from below;
    • «Mais, feri un foi, une autre, et encore», where "feri un foi" has two spelling errors and one grammar error;
    • «J’e suis comme un souleil tout froid», which was probably starting from "Je suis un soleil tout froid", which come to think of it would be more literal – probably why it was later changed;
    • «Parce que toi / Au cœur tu fonds le gel» for the last two lines;
  • All these French differences and errors get fixed in the 18/8/12 15:27 file, save for the last two lines;
  • Both those differences in the last two lines get "fixed" only in the 9/7/13 12:22 file, the previous file being 8/5/13 22:08.
Let's see it!


孤独的心
从不想改变什么
冷漠的眼
已经看过太多虚伪
只有你能给我
真实温暖的感受
走出了冰冷的角落

孤独的心
从不想改变什么
冷漠的眼
已经看过太多虚伪
再没有一个人
爱我如此地深刻
让我从黑暗中逃脱

我就像一个冷冷的太阳
曾经也有颗狂热的心房
但是一次一次受的创伤
失去燃烧的力量

我是冷冷的太阳
曾经也有颗狂热的心房
因为你
熔化心中冰霜



My lonely heart
Ne’er wants to change but one thing.
And my cold eyes
Hypocrites too many have seen.
Only you can give me
A feeling that's truly warm
To get out of this corner cold.

My lonely heart
Ne’er wants to change but one thing.
And my cold eyes
Hypocrites too many have seen.
There’s ne’er been a person
That so deeply me has loved
To let me flee out of the dark

I now indeed am like a cold cold sun,
I once did also have a burning heart,
But, as wounded once and twice and once more,
It has lost the power to burn.

I now am a cold cold sun,
I once did also have a burning heart,
Because you
The frost in my heart melt.
Gūdú de xīn
Cóng bù xiǎng gǎibiàn shénme
Lěngmò de yǎn
Yǐjīng kànguò tài duō xūwèi
Zhǐyǒu nǐ néng gěi wǒ
Zhēnshí wēnnuǎn de gǎnshòu
Zǒuchūle bīnglěng de jiǎoluò

Gūdú de xīn
Cóng bù xiǎng gǎibiàn shénme
Lěngmò de yǎn
Yǐjīng kànguò tài duō xūwèi
Zài méiyǒu yī gè rén
Ài wǒ rúcǐ dì shēnkè
Ràng wǒ cóng hēi'àn zhōng táotuō

Wǒ jiùxiàng yī gè lěng lěng de tàiyáng
Céngjīng yě yǒu kē kuángrè de xīnfáng
Dànshì yīcì yīcì shòu de chuāngshāng
Shīqù ránshāo de lìliàng

Wǒ shì lěng lěng de tàiyáng
Céngjīng yěyǒu kē kuángrè de xīnfáng
Yīnwèi nǐ
Rónghuà xīn zhōng bīngshuāng



Mon cœur tout seul
Ne veut jamais changer rien.
Mes yeux tous froids
Ont déjà vu trop d’hypocrites.
Seul tu peux donner moi
Un sentiment vraiment chaud
Pour sortir de cet angle froid

Mon cœur tout seul
Ne veut jamais changer rien.
Mes yeux tous froids
Ont déjà vu trop d’hypocrites.
Personne jamais m’a
Aimé profondement ainsi
Qu’elle m’a fait enfuir des ténèbres.

Maint’nant je suis comme un soleil très froid,
Un temps j’avais aussi un cœur brûlant,
Mais, féri une fois, une autre, et encore
Il ne peut plus rien brûler.

Je suis un soleil très froid,
Un temps j’avais aussi un cœur brûlant,
Parce que tu
De mon cœur fonds le gel.