Given all the "important companions" of the last few posts (excluding the Christmas break, of course), it seems a good place to insert a few posts about songs where the singer is asking for an SO's company. For example, today we have Lela, a Galician (nope, not Spanish, and nope, not Portuguese - trust me, I tried to rectify the spelling for both languages and had to conclude it was neither) song I translated to Chinese.
HEUREKA! I found a printed version of the file, and it's going to appear at post end. It has Portuguese, Spanish, English, and Italian. Date? No idea, but definitely during High School, which means between Sep 2007 and Sep 2012, though I think it was spring so that limits the date options :). Also, I'm pretty sure it wasn't in year 5 of high school, meaning it wouldn't be 2012. Pretty sure it wasn't done while I was busy with Min and Hakka songs just found :). Not sure about simultaneity with Sappho (years 3 and 4)… Actually, an old HD popped up with the file, in multiple versions, one of which has metadata 27/3/09 (creation) and 17/6/09 (edit). The diary unfortunately doesn't mention these translations until 17/6, where it says «termino Lela in comp» (I finish Lela on the computer). So that's it for those old ones.
Upon planning to record Galician Portuguese Spanish Italian on 11/3/23, I realize "meninhas" or similar doesn't mean pupils in Spanish or Portuguese, so I find "pupilas" for both, and that's in the evening of 10/3 or the night before 11/3. On 11/3 at 11:54 I fix the Spanish as per below. Then, while recording, or preparing to record, I make more tweaks from 12:14 to 13, with a couple on 12/3 shortly before noon, possibly while captioning. This leads to the versions in the Revised Chinese tab, whereas the other tabs have the originao 2009 versions.
I then translated the song to Greek at 2:32-3:04 in the night between 17/3/23 and 18/3/23, having it corrected by Kika between the next day and 20/3. This version is only in the Revised Chinese tab.
So let's see this!
- The first record of the Chinese appears to be a file from Dec 16 2012, created 14:57 edited 15:02, which puts this firmly in year 2. This is the original Chinese below. I sent it to my corrector that day at 15:05.
- Then on 5/3/13 at 18:57 I sent a mail to my corrector which contained the corrected Chinese below, apart from the different line 为一个死去的爱. There are no other email records of this translation, and the first record of the corrected translation is in a file created on Jul 18 2013 at 15:55 and last edited on Aug 22 2013 at 11:24, which contains precisely the below corrected Chinese.
- On Aug 10 2018, at 18:30-18:36, I made some more changes, getting to the revised Chinese below.
HEUREKA! I found a printed version of the file, and it's going to appear at post end. It has Portuguese, Spanish, English, and Italian. Date? No idea, but definitely during High School, which means between Sep 2007 and Sep 2012, though I think it was spring so that limits the date options :). Also, I'm pretty sure it wasn't in year 5 of high school, meaning it wouldn't be 2012. Pretty sure it wasn't done while I was busy with Min and Hakka songs just found :). Not sure about simultaneity with Sappho (years 3 and 4)… Actually, an old HD popped up with the file, in multiple versions, one of which has metadata 27/3/09 (creation) and 17/6/09 (edit). The diary unfortunately doesn't mention these translations until 17/6, where it says «termino Lela in comp» (I finish Lela on the computer). So that's it for those old ones.
Upon planning to record Galician Portuguese Spanish Italian on 11/3/23, I realize "meninhas" or similar doesn't mean pupils in Spanish or Portuguese, so I find "pupilas" for both, and that's in the evening of 10/3 or the night before 11/3. On 11/3 at 11:54 I fix the Spanish as per below. Then, while recording, or preparing to record, I make more tweaks from 12:14 to 13, with a couple on 12/3 shortly before noon, possibly while captioning. This leads to the versions in the Revised Chinese tab, whereas the other tabs have the originao 2009 versions.
I then translated the song to Greek at 2:32-3:04 in the night between 17/3/23 and 18/3/23, having it corrected by Kika between the next day and 20/3. This version is only in the Revised Chinese tab.
So let's see this!
Están as nubes chorando Por un amor que morréu Están as rúas molladas De tanto como chovéu Lela, Lela Leliña por quen eu morro Quero mirarme Nas meniñas dos teus ollos Non me deixes E ten compasión de min Sen tí non podo Sen tí non podo vivir Dame alento das túas palabras Dame celme do teu corazón Dame lume das túas miradas Dame vida co teu dulce amor 天的那云正在哭泣 为一个死了的爱 所有街道现在湿透 因为多的雨已来 列拉列拉 亲爱让我死的列拉 想要见自己 在你的眼睛的瞳孔 莫放弃我 为着我有个可怜 没有你无法 没有你无法生活 请你给我你的话的呼吸 请你给我你的心的暖 请你给我你眼神的灯光 请你给我你甜爱的活 Estão as numes chorando Por um amor que morreu, Estão as ruas molhadas De tanto como choveu. Lela, Lela, Lelinha por quem eu morro, Quero mirarme Nas meninas dos teus olhos, Não me deixes, E tem compaixão de mim, Sem ti no podo, Sem ti no podo viver. Dame alento das tuas palavras, Dame celme do teu coração, Dame lume das tuas miradas, Dame vida com teu doce amor. All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads have been drenchèd So much, indeed, it has rained. Lela, Lela, Dear Lela for whom I'm dying, I wanna see me In your eyes' lovèly girlies1, Do not leave me, And have compassion of me, Without you, darling, Without you I cannot live. Give me breath with your lovèly speaking, Give me essence from your lovely heart, Give me light with your glances alone, Give me life with a love sweet as yours. 1 The pupils (from pupilla, "little girl") were so called due to the reflection of oneself seen when looking in somebody's eyes. |
All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads are now drenchèd With all the rain that's come down Oh Lela, Lela, Sweet Lela for whom I'm dying I want to see me In your eyes' beautiful pupils Do not leave me And have compassion of me Without you darling, Without you I cannot live Please let me breathe in some of your sweet words Let me taste the sweetness of your heart Shine upon me the light of your two eyes With that sweet love of yours give me life Tiān de nà yún zhèngzài kūqì Wéi yī gè sǐle de ài Suǒyǒu jiēdào xiànzài shī tòu Yīnwèi duō de yǔ yǐ lái Lièlāliè lā Qīn'ài ràng wǒ sǐ de Lièlā Xiǎngyào jiàn zìjǐ Zài nǐ de yǎnjīng de tóngkǒng Mò fàngqì wǒ Wèizhe wǒ yǒu gè kělián Méi yǒu nǐ wúfǎ Méi yǒu nǐ wúfǎ shēnghuó Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ de huà de hūxī Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ de xīn de nuǎn Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ yǎnshén de dēngguāng Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ tián ài de huó Están las nubes llorando Por un amor que murió, Están las ruas mojadas De tanto como llovió. Lela, Lela, Leliña por quien yo muero, Quiero mirarme En las meniñas de tus ojos, No me dejes, Y tiene compasión de mi, Sen ti no puedo, Sen ti no puedo vivir. Dame aliento de las tus palabras, Dame esencia de tu corazón, Dame luz de las tus miradas, Dame vida con tu doce amor. Le nubi stanno piangendo Per un amor che mori, Le strade sono inzuppate, L'acqua continua a cader. Lela, Lela, Lelina per cui io muoio, Voglio specchiarmi Nelle pupille tue belle, Non lasciarmi, Abbi compassion di me, lo, no, non posso Vivere senza di te. Dammi fiato colle tue parole, Dammi essenza col tuo dolce cuor, Dammi luce coi tuoi svelti sguardi, Dammi vita col tuo dolce amor. |
Están as nubes chorando Por un amor que morréu Están as rúas molladas De tanto como chovéu Lela, Lela Leliña por quen eu morro Quero mirarme Nas meniñas dos teus ollos Non me deixes E ten compasión de min Sen tí non podo Sen tí non podo vivir Dame alento das túas palabras Dame celme do teu corazón Dame lume das túas miradas Dame vida co teu dulce amor 天边那云正在哭泣 为个已死去的爱 所有街道都已湿透 因为大雨已到来 列拉列拉 亲列拉你让我死去 想看见自己 在你的眼睛的瞳孔 莫放弃我 请你可怜可怜我 没有你无法 没有你无法生活 请你给我你的话的呼吸 请你给我心中的温暖 请你给我你眼神的灯光 请你给我甜爱的生活 Estão as numes chorando Por um amor que morreu, Estão as ruas molhadas De tanto como choveu. Lela, Lela, Lelinha por quem eu morro, Quero mirarme Nas meninas dos teus olhos, Não me deixes, E tem compaixão de mim, Sem ti no podo, Sem ti no podo viver. Dame alento das tuas palavras, Dame celme do teu coração, Dame lume das tuas miradas, Dame vida com teu doce amor. All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads have been drenchèd So much, indeed, it has rained. Lela, Lela, Dear Lela for whom I'm dying, I wanna see me In your eyes' lovèly girlies1, Do not leave me, And have compassion of me, Without you, darling, Without you I cannot live. Give me breath with your lovèly speaking, Give me essence from your lovely heart, Give me light with your glances alone, Give me life with a love sweet as yours. 1 The pupils (from pupilla, "little girl") were so called due to the reflection of oneself seen when looking in somebody's eyes. |
All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads are now drenchèd With all the rain that's come down Oh Lela, Lela, Sweet Lela for whom I'm dying I want to see me In your eyes' beautiful pupils Do not leave me And have compassion of me Without you darling, Without you I cannot live Please let me breathe in some of your sweet words Let me taste the sweetness of your heart Shine upon me the light of your two eyes With that sweet love of yours give me life Tiānbiān nà yún zhèngzài kūqì Wèi gè yǐ sǐqù de ài Suǒyǒu jiēdào dōu yǐ shītòu Yīnwéi dà yǔ yǐ dàolái Lièlā Lièlā Qīn Lièlā nǐ ràng wǒ sǐqù Xiǎng kànjiàn zìjǐ Zài nǐ de yǎnjīng de tóngkǒng Mò fàngqì wǒ Qǐng nǐ kělián kělián wǒ Méi yǒu nǐ wúfǎ Méi yǒu nǐ wúfǎ shēnghuó Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ de huà de hūxī Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ xīn zhōng de wēnnuǎn Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ nǐ yǎnshén de dēngguāng Qǐng nǐ gěi wǒ tián ài de shēnghuó Están las nubes llorando Por un amor que murió, Están las ruas mojadas De tanto como llovió. Lela, Lela, Leliña por quien yo muero, Quiero mirarme En las meniñas de tus ojos, No me dejes, Y tiene compasión de mi, Sen ti no puedo, Sen ti no puedo vivir. Dame aliento de las tus palabras, Dame esencia de tu corazón, Dame luz de las tus miradas, Dame vida con tu doce amor. Le nubi stanno piangendo Per un amor che mori, Le strade sono inzuppate, L'acqua continua a cader. Lela, Lela, Lelina per cui io muoio, Voglio specchiarmi Nelle pupille tue belle, Non lasciarmi, Abbi compassion di me, lo, no, non posso Vivere senza di te. Dammi fiato colle tue parole, Dammi essenza col tuo dolce cuor, Dammi luce coi tuoi svelti sguardi, Dammi vita col tuo dolce amor. |
Están as nubes chorando Por un amor que morréu Están as rúas molladas De tanto como chovéu Lela, Lela Leliña por quen eu morro Quero mirarme Nas meniñas dos teus ollos Non me deixes E ten compasión de min Sen tí non podo Sen tí non podo vivir Dame alento das túas palabras Dame celme do teu corazón Dame lume das túas miradas Dame vida co teu dulce amor 天上的云都在哭泣 为了已死去的爱 所有街道都已湿透 因为大雨已到来 列拉列拉 阿让我死去的列拉 想在你眼睛 的瞳孔来看到自己 莫放弃我 请你可怜可怜我 没有你，亲爱， 没你我活不下去 请你用你的话给我呼吸 请你用你心给我甜蜜 请你用你眼神给我灯光 请用你甜爱让我生活 Estão as numes chorando Por um amor que morreu, Estão as ruas molhadas De tanto como choveu. Lela, Lela, Lelinha por quem eu morro, Quero mirarme Nas pupilas dos teus olhos, Não me deixes, E tem compaixão de mim, Sem ti no posso, Sem ti no posso viver. Dame alento das tuas palavras, Dame celme do teu coração, Dame a lūz das tuas olhadas, Dame vida com teu doce amor. All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads have been drenchèd So much, indeed, it has rained. Lela, Lela, Dear Lela for whom I'm dying, I wanna see me In your eyes' lovèly girlies1, Do not leave me, And have compassion of me, Without you, darling, Without you I cannot live. Give me breath with your lovèly speaking, Give me essence from your lovely heart, Give me light with your glances alone, Give me life with a love sweet as yours. 1 The pupils (from pupilla, "little girl") were so called due to the reflection of oneself seen when looking in somebody's eyes. Τα σύννεφα τώρα κλαίνε: Η αγάπη μας πέθανε. Οι δρόμοι 'ναι πλημμυρισμένοι: Μια θάλασσα έβρεξε! Λέλα, Λέλα! Λέλα, για σένα πεθαίνω, Θέλω να με βλέπω Μες στων ματιών σου τις κόρες! Μη μ' αφήσεις! Εμένα να συμπονάς! Χωρίς εσένα Δεν μπορώ εγώ να ζω πια! Δώσε μου τη πνοή με τα λόγια, Δώσε ουσία από την καρδιά σου, Δώσε μου, αχ, το φως των βλεμμάτων, Δωσ' μου ζωή με γλυκά φιλιά σου! |
All of the sky's clouds are crying Just for a love that has died All of the roads are now drenchèd With all the rain that's come down Oh Lela, Lela, Sweet Lela for whom I'm dying I want to see me In your eyes' beautiful pupils Do not leave me And have compassion of me Without you darling, Without you I cannot live Please let me breathe in some of your sweet words Let me taste the sweetness of your heart Shine upon me the light of your two eyes With that sweet love of yours give me life Tiān shàng de yún dōu zài kūqì Wèile yǐ sǐqù de ài Suǒyǒu jiēdào dōu yǐ shītòu Yīnwéi dà yǔ yǐ dàolái Lièlā Lièlā Ā ràng wǒ sǐqù de Lièlā Xiǎng zài nǐ yǎnjīng De tóngkǒng lái kàn dào zìjǐ Mò fàngqì wǒ Qǐng nǐ kělián kělián wǒ Méi yǒu nǐ, qīn'ài, Méi nǐ wǒ huó bù xiàqù Qǐng nǐ yòng nǐ de huà gěi wǒ hūxī Qǐng nǐ yòng nǐ xīn gěi wǒ tiánmì Qǐng nǐ yòng nǐ yǎnshén gěi wǒ dēngguāng Qǐng yòng nǐ tián ài ràng wǒ shēnghuó Están las nubes llorando Por un amor que murió, Están las ruas mojadas De tanto como llovió. Lela, Lela, Leliña por quien me muero, Quiero mirarme En tus pupilas hermosas, No me dejes, Y ten compasión de mí, Sin ti no puedo, Sin ti no puedo vivir. Dame aliento con dulces palabras, Dame esencia con tu corazón, Dame luz de tus ojeadas, Dame vida con tu dulce amor. Le nubi stanno piangendo Per un amor che mori, Le strade sono inzuppate, L'acqua continua a cader. Lela, Lela, Lelina per cui io muoio, Voglio specchiarmi Nelle pupille tue belle, Non lasciarmi, Abbi compassion di me, lo, no, non posso Vivere senza di te. Dammi fiato colle tue parole, Dammi essenza col tuo dolce cuor, Dammi luce coi tuoi svelti sguardi, Dammi vita col tuo dolce amor. Ta sýnnefa tṓra klä́ne: I̱ agápi̱ mas péthane. Ö drómö 'nä pli̱mmyrisménö: Mia thálassa évrexe! Léla, Léla! Léla, gia séna pethä́nō, Thélō na me vlépō Mes stōn matiṓn soy tis kóres! Mi̱ m' afí̱sës! Eména na symponás! Khōrís eséna Den mporṓ egṓ na zō pia! Dṓse moy ti̱ pnoí̱ me ta lógia, Dṓse oysía apó ti̱n kardiá soy, Dṓse moy, akh, to fōs tōn vlemmátōn, Dōs' moy zōí̱ me glyká filiá soy! |
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