So, the point of this post is to narrate the history of, and fix up the details of, a tune I made for the poem in the title.
The starting point is 12/10/11 when, as per my diary, «surgens in mente habui ideam generalem musicæ pro Rime of the Ancyent Marinere» (as I got up, I had in mind the general idea of a tune for the Rime of the Ancyent Marinere). Here is that idea:
There are a couple things from… well, probably late 2011, since by the end of the year we abandoned the Rime in school. It was definitely within high school, which ended in 2012.
The first such thing is a variant for the tune of l. 2 of any stanza, which I give below as associated with l. 6 of the Rime:
So instead of going just up, "next of" goes up then down.
The other thing is I noticed some stanzas had different numbers of lines. In particular, I fixed the tune to accommodate an extra line in the second half (arrow marks stanza beginning):
I finally first wrote this down on 3/12/21, and then noticed some stanzas have extra lines in the first half. For those, I thought I'd just repeat the tune, since I thought it would be 3+2 stanzas. Same day 13:08/09, I thought of what to do with stanzas which had 4 lines in the second half, and came up with this way to repeat the tune (stanza starts at the green vertical playbar):
So so far we have the following kinds of stanzas: 2+2, 2+3, 3+2, 2+4. Now we have to meet the 4+2 stanzas, which I handled at 13:14 of that same 3/12/21 (image starts midway through l. 1 of stanza):
Remember the first of the two other things from probably late 2011? Well, as I wrote this down, at 13:16/17, I thought of integrating it into this thing for l. 3, and at 13:20 I thought of changing its values:
But that, unfortunately, is not all, as I discovered on 1/2/24 when I came back to this to kinda plan the "Poetry after the Classics" episode I plan to do for this tune. Indeed, there is one stanza with 9 lines. For that, I sent myself, at 0:12, the following: «Primo trio con solo variante verso 2, secondo trio con verso 2 "movimentato", terzo trio in tonalità cambiata.». This translates to the following score:
So now the intention is to retrieve the full text from here (I abandoned this link because it didn't match how I remembered stanza 1, with "stoppest" instead of "stopp'st thou" in l. 4), and go through each and every stanza to precisely decide what to do with the tune. For this purpose, I will use the following labels:
While recording, I applied some tune changes, some willingly, some by mis-singing. I will eventually figure out the latter, but the former, or at least part of them, I noted down in messages to myself:
The starting point is 12/10/11 when, as per my diary, «surgens in mente habui ideam generalem musicæ pro Rime of the Ancyent Marinere» (as I got up, I had in mind the general idea of a tune for the Rime of the Ancyent Marinere). Here is that idea:
The first such thing is a variant for the tune of l. 2 of any stanza, which I give below as associated with l. 6 of the Rime:
The other thing is I noticed some stanzas had different numbers of lines. In particular, I fixed the tune to accommodate an extra line in the second half (arrow marks stanza beginning):
- [1a] [2a] [3a] [4a] for the tune lines of the general idea;
- [1b] and [2b] for the variants of [1a] and [2a] with the "next of kin" variant from probably late 2011;
- [1c] and [2c] for the altered-value variants of [1b] and [2b];
- [1d] for the 4+2 stanzas' l. 2;
- Any of the above with a ' to warn myself that the line starts with a stressed syllable and the fitting of the words to the tune should be tweaked accordingly;
- [3b] for the tune of the extra line in X+3 stanzas;
- [4b] for the altered version of [4a] found in X+4 stanzas;
- The primed versions of these two, where in particular [3a'] is from 18:08 on 10/2/24 and deletes its first note and turns its second one to two identical quavers.
While recording, I applied some tune changes, some willingly, some by mis-singing. I will eventually figure out the latter, but the former, or at least part of them, I noted down in messages to myself:
- "A something in the sky" should be 4a not 3a, and the 1s should be 1a, 24/2/24 14:34; these were actually typoes; another one is that «From the sails the dew did drip» should be 2c not 1c;
- "Almost upon the western wave", make it a non-prime, 14:37;
- "Her locks were yellow as gold" 2c not 2a, 14:49;
- "And I heard nor sigh nor groan" 2c not 2b, 14:55;
- "I fear thy skinny hand!" 2c not 2a, 14:57;
- "I watched the water-snakes" 2c not 2a, 15:07;
- "Without or wave or wind" 2a->2b, 12:44, -> 2c, 9/3/24 12:45;
- "Had never passed away", 2a->2b, 12:45;
- "Doth walk in fear and dread", 2a->2c, 12:45;
- "The light-house top I see?", 2a->2c, 12:45;
- "Till rising from the same, 2a->2b, 12:46;
- "It was a heavenly sight", 2a->2c, 12:48;
- "Up to the Moon is cast", 4a->4a', 12:53;
- "Nor sound nor motion made", 2c->2a, 12:57;
- "No voice did they impart", 2c->2b, 13:04;
- "Why, this is strange, I trow", 2a->2c, 10/3/24 17:07;
- "And they answered not our cheer", 2a->2c->2b, 17:09;
- "Who now doth crazy go", 2a->2c, 17:11;
- "Forthwith this frame of mine was wrench'd", 1a->1a', 17:12;
- "That agony returns", 2a->2c, 17:12;
- "'Tis sweeter far to me", 2a->2c->2b, 17:15;
- "And all together pray", 2b->2c, 17:16;
- "To thee, thou Wedding-Guest", 2a->2c, 17:17, ->2b, 17:17;
- "And is of sense forlorn", 2c->2b, 17:18;
- "Which sky and ocean smote", 2a->2c, 17:27;
- "I stood on the firm land", 2a->2b, 17:28;
- "Alone on a wide wide sea", 2a->2b, 17:31.
- Finally, on 16/3/24 at 23:05, I decide that «Turned from the bridegroom's door» should be a prime line.
Part the first
[1a] It is an ancient Mariner,
[2a] And he stoppeth one of three.
[3a] "By thy long beard and glittering eye,
[4a] Now wherefore stopp'st thou me?
[1a] The Bridegroom's doors are opened wide,
[2b] And I am next of kin;
[3a] The guests are met, the feast is set:
[4a] May'st hear the merry din."
[1a] He holds him with his skinny hand,
[2a] "There was a ship," quoth he.
[3a] "Hold off! unhand me, grey-beard loon!"
[4a] Eftsoons his hand dropt he.
[1a] He holds him with his glittering eye—
[2c] The Wedding-Guest stood still,
[3a] And listens like a three years child:
[4a] The Mariner hath his will.
[1a] The Wedding-Guest sat on a stone:
[2b] He cannot choose but hear;
[3a] And thus spake on that ancient man,
[4a] The bright-eyed mariner.
[1a] The ship was cheer'd, the harbour clear'd,
[2a'] Merrily did we drop
[3a] Below the kirk, below the hill,
[4a] Below the lighthouse top.
[1a] The Sun came up upon the left,
[2a'] Out of the sea came he;
[3a] And he shone bright, and on the right
[4a] Went down into the sea.
[1a'] Higher and higher every day,
[2c] Till over the mast at noon—
[3a] The Wedding-Guest here beat his breast,
[4a] For he heard the loud bassoon.
[1a] The bride hath paced into the hall,
[2b'] Red as a rose is she;
[3a'] Nodding their heads before her goes
[4a] The merry minstrelsy.
[1a] The Wedding-Guest he beat his breast,
[2b] Yet he cannot choose but hear;
[3a] And thus spake on that ancient man,
[4a] The bright-eyed Mariner.
[1a] And now the storm-blast came, and he
[2c] Was tyrannous and strong:
[3a] He struck with his o'ertaking wings,
[4a] And chased us south along.
[1a] With sloping masts and dipping prow,
[1d] As who pursued with yell and blow
[1c] Still treads the shadow of his foe
[2a] And forward bends his head,
[3a] The ship drove fast, loud roar'd the blast,
[4a] The southward aye we fled.
[1a] And now there came both mist and snow,
[2c] And it grew wonderous cold:
[3a] And ice, mast-high, came floating by,
[4a] As green as emerald.
[1a] And through the drifts the snowy clift
[2b] Did send a dismal sheen:
[3a] Nor shapes of men nor beasts we ken—
[4a] The ice was all between.
[1a] The ice was here, the ice was there,
[2a] The ice was all around:
[3a] It cracked and growled, and roar'd and howl'd,
[4a] Like noises in a swound!
[1a] At length did cross an Albatross:
[2c'] Thorough the fog it came;
[3a] As if it had been a Christian soul,
[4a] We hailed it in God's name.
[1a] It ate the food it ne'er had eat,
[2a] And round and round it flew.
[3a] The ice did split with a thunder-fit;
[4a] The helmsman steer'd us through!
[1a] And a good south wind sprung up behind;
[2a] The Albatross did follow,
[3c] And every day, for food or play,
[4a] Came to the Mariner's hollo!
[1a] In mist or cloud, on mast or shroud,
[2a] It perch'd for vespers nine;
[3a] Whiles all the night, through fog-smoke white,
[4a'] Glimmered the white Moon-shine.
[1a] "God save thee, ancient Mariner!
[2b] From the fiends, that plague thee thus!—
[3a] Why look'st thou so?"—With my cross-bow
[4a] I shot the Albatross!
Part the second
[1a] The Sun now rose upon the right:
[2a'] Out of the sea came he,
[3a] Still hid in mist, and on the left
[4a] Went down into the sea.
[1a] And the good south wind still blew behind,
[2c] But no sweet bird did follow,
[3a] Nor any day for food or play
[4a] Came to the mariners' hollo!
[1a] And I had done an hellish thing,
[2a] And it would work 'em woe:
[3a] For all averred, I had killed the bird
[4b] That made the breeze to blow.
[3a] Ah wretch! said they, the bird to slay,
[4a] That made the breeze to blow!
[1a] Nor dim nor red, like God's own head,
[2a] The glorious Sun uprist:
[3a] Then all averred, I had killed the bird
[4b] That brought the fog and mist.
[3b] 'Twas right, said they, such birds to slay,
[4a] That bring the fog and mist.
[1a] The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew,
[2a] The furrow stream'd off free:
[3a] We were the first that ever burst
[4a] Into that silent sea.
[1a] Down dropt the breeze, the sails dropt down,
[2a] 'Twas sad as sad could be;
[3a] And we did speak only to break
[4a] The silence of the sea!
[1a] All in a hot and copper sky,
[2a] The bloody Sun, at noon,
[3a] Right up above the mast did stand,
[4a] No bigger than the Moon.
[1a'] Day after day, day after day,
[2c] We stuck, nor breath nor motion,
[3a] As idle as a painted ship
[4a] Upon a painted ocean.
[1a] Water, water, every where,
[2b] And all the boards did shrink;
[3a] Water, water, every where,
[4a] Nor any drop to drink.
[1a] The very deep did rot: O Christ!
[2c] That ever this should be!
[3a] Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
[4a] Upon the slimy sea.
[1a] About, about, in reel and rout
[2a] The death-fires danced at night;
[3a] The water, like a witch's oils,
[4a] Burnt green, and blue and white.
[1a] And some in dreams assurèd were
[2a] Of the spirit that plagued us so:
[3a] Nine fathom deep he had followed us
[4a] From the land of mist and snow.
[1a] And every tongue, through utter drought,
[2c] Was wither'd at the root;
[3a] We could not speak, no more than if
[4a] We had been choak'd with soot.
[1a] Ah! well a-day! what evil looks
[2a] Had I from old and young!
[3a] Instead of the cross, the Albatross
[4a] About my neck was hung.
Part the third
[1a] There passed a weary time. Each throat
[2a] Was parched, and glazed each eye.
[3a] A weary time! a weary time!
[4b] How glazed each weary eye!
[3a] When looking westward, I beheld
[4a] A something in the sky.
[1a] At first it seem'd a little speck,
[2a] And then it seem'd a mist;
[3a] It moved and moved, and took at last
[4a] A certain shape, I wist.
[1a] A speck, a mist, a shape, I wist!
[2c] And still it neared and neared:
[3a] As if it dodged a water-sprite,
[4a] It plunged and tack'd and veer'd.
[1a] With throat unslack'd, with black lips baked,
[2a] We could nor laugh nor wail;
[3a] Through utter drought all dumb we stood!
[3b] I bit my arm, I sucked the blood,
[4a] And cried, A sail! a sail!
[1a] With throats unslacked, with black lips baked,
[2b] Agape they heard me call:
[3a] Gramercy! they for joy did grin,
[3b] And all at once their breath drew in,
[4a] As they were drinking all.
[1a] See! see! (I cried) she tacks no more!
[2c'] Hither to work us weal;
[3a] Without a breeze, without a tide,
[4a] She steddies with upright keel!
[1a] The western wave was all a-flame.
[2a] The day was well nigh done!
[3a] Almost upon the western wave
[4b'] Rested the broad bright Sun;
[3a] When that strange shape drove suddenly
[4a] Betwixt us and the Sun.
[1a] And straight the Sun was flecked with bars,
[2a] (Heaven's Mother send us grace!)
[3a] As if through a dungeon-grate he peer'd,
[4a] With broad and burning face.
[1a] Alas! (thought I, and my heart beat loud)
[2a] How fast she nears and nears!
[3a] Are those her sails that glance in the Sun,
[4a] Like restless gossameres!
[1a] Are those her ribs through which the Sun
[2a] Did peer, as through a grate?
[3a] And is that Woman all her crew?
[3b] Is that a Death? and are there two?
[4a] Is Death that woman's mate?
[1a] Her lips were red, her looks were free,
[2c] Her locks were yellow as gold:
[3a] Her skin was as white as leprosy,
[3b] The Night-Mair Life-in-death was she,
[4a] Who thicks man's blood with cold.
[1a] The naked hulk alongside came,
[2c] And the twain were casting dice;
[3a] 'The game is done! I've won! I've won!'
[4a] Quoth she, and whistles thrice.
[1a] The Sun’s rim dips; the stars rush out:
[2a] At one stride comes the dark;
[3a] With far-heard whisper, o’er the sea,
[4a] Off shot the spectre-bark.
[1a] We listen'd and looked sideways up!
[1c] Fear at my heart, as at a cup,
[2a] My life-blood seem'd to sip!
[1a] The stars were dim, and thick the night,
[1d] The steerman's face by his lamp gleam'd white;
[2c] From the sails the dew did drip—
[3a] Till clombe above the eastern bar
[2b] The horned Moon, with one bright star
[4a] Within the nether tip.
[1b'] One after one, by the star-dogg'd Moon,
[2a] Too quick for groan or sigh,
[3a] Each turn'd his face with a ghastly pang,
[4a] And curs'd me with his eye.
[1a] Four times fifty living men,
[2c] (And I heard nor sigh nor groan)
[3a] With heavy thump, a lifeless lump,
[4a] They dropped down one by one.
[1a] The souls did from their bodies fly,—
[2a] They fled to bliss or woe!
[3a] And every soul, it passed me by,
[4a] Like the whizz of my cross-bow!
Part the fourth
[1a] "I fear thee, ancient Mariner!
[2c] I fear thy skinny hand!
[3a] And thou art long, and lank, and brown,
[4a] As is the ribbed sea-sand.
[1a] I fear thee and thy glittering eye,
[2b] And thy skinny hand, so brown."—
[3a] Fear not, fear not, thou Wedding-Guest!
[4a] This body dropt not down.
[1a] Alone, alone, all, all alone,
[2a] Alone on a wide wide sea!
[3a] And never a saint took pity on
[4a] My soul in agony.
[1a] The many men, so beautiful!
[2a] And they all dead did lie:
[3a] And a thousand thousand slimy things
[4a] Liv'd on; and so did I.
[1a] I look'd upon the rotting sea,
[2a] And drew my eyes away;
[3a] I look'd upon the rotting deck,
[4a] And there the dead men lay.
[1a] I look'd to heaven, and tried to pray;
[2a] But or ever a prayer had gusht,
[3a] A wicked whisper came, and made
[4a] My heart as dry as dust.
[1a] I closed my lids, and kept them close,
[2a] And the balls like pulses beat;
[3a] For the sky and the sea, and the sea and the sky
[3b] Lay like a load on my weary eye,
[4a] And the dead were at my feet.
[1a] The cold sweat melted from their limbs,
[2a] Nor rot nor reek did they:
[3a] The look with which they look'd on me
[4a] Had never pass'd away.
[1a] An orphan's curse would drag to hell
[2a] A spirit from on high;
[3a] But oh! more horrible than that
[4b] Is the curse in a dead man's eye!
[3a] Seven days, seven nights, I saw that curse,
[4a] And yet I could not die.
[1a] The moving Moon went up the sky,
[2a] And no where did abide:
[3a'] Softly she was going up,
[4a] And a star or two beside—
[1a] Her beams bemock'd the sultry main,
[2a] Like April hoar-frost spread;
[3a] But where the ship's huge shadow lay,
[3b] The charmèd water burnt alway
[4a] A still and awful red.
[1a] Beyond the shadow of the ship,
[2c] I watched the water-snakes:
[3a] They moved in tracks of shining white,
[3b] And when they reared, the elfish light
[4a] Fell off in hoary flakes.
[1a] Within the shadow of the ship
[2a] I watched their rich attire:
[3a] Blue, glossy green, and velvet black,
[3b] They coiled and swam; and every track
[4a] Was a flash of golden fire.
[1a] O happy living things! no tongue
[2c] Their beauty might declare:
[3a] A spring of love gushed from my heart,
[4b] And I blessed them unaware!
[3a] Sure my kind saint took pity on me,
[4a] And I blessed them unaware.
[1a] The self-same moment I could pray;
[2b] And from my neck so free
[3a] The Albatross fell off, and sank
[4a] Like lead into the sea.
Part the fifth
[1a] Oh sleep! it is a gentle thing,
[2a] Belov'd from pole to pole!
[3a] To Mary Queen the praise be given!
[3b] She sent the gentle sleep from Heaven,
[4a] That slid into my soul.
[1a] The silly buckets on the deck,
[2a] That had so long remained,
[3a] I dreamt that they were filled with dew;
[4a] And when I awoke, it rained.
[1a] My lips were wet, my throat was cold,
[2c] My garments all were dank;
[3a] Sure I had drunken in my dreams,
[4a] And still my body drank.
[1a] I moved, and could not feel my limbs:
[2a] I was so light—almost
[3a] I thought that I had died in sleep,
[4a] And was a blessed ghost.
[1a] And soon I heard a roaring wind:
[2a] It did not come anear;
[3a] But with its sound it shook the sails,
[4a] That were so thin and sere.
[1a] The upper air burst into life!
[2c] And a hundred fire-flags sheen,
[3a] To and fro they were hurried about;
[3b] And to and fro, and in and out,
[4a] The wan stars danced between.
[1a] And the coming wind did roar more loud,
[2a] And the sails did sigh like sedge;
[3a] And the rain poured down from one black cloud;
[4a] The Moon was at its edge.
[1a] The thick black cloud was cleft, and still
[2c] The Moon was at its side:
[3a] Like waters shot from some high crag,
[3b] The lightning fell with never a jag,
[4a] A river steep and wide.
[1a] The loud wind never reached the ship,
[2a] Yet now the ship moved on!
[3a] Beneath the lightning and the Moon
[4a] The dead men gave a groan.
[1a] They groan'd, they stirr'd, they all uprose,
[2c] Nor spake, nor moved their eyes;
[3a] It had been strange, even in a dream,
[4a] To have seen those dead men rise.
[1a] The helmsman steered, the ship moved on;
[2a] Yet never a breeze up blew;
[3a] The mariners all 'gan work the ropes,
[4b] Where they were wont to do;
[3a] They raised their limbs like lifeless tools—
[4a] We were a ghastly crew.
[1a] The body of my brother's son
[2a] Stood by me, knee to knee:
[3a] The body and I pulled at one rope,
[4a] But he said nought to me.
[1a] "I fear thee, ancient Mariner!"
[2a] Be calm, thou Wedding-Guest!
[3a] 'Twas not those souls that fled in pain,
[3b] Which to their corses came again,
[4a] But a troop of spirits blest:
[1a] For when it dawned—they dropped their arms,
[2b] And clustered round the mast;
[3a] Sweet sounds rose slowly through their mouths,
[4a] And from their bodies passed.
[1a] Around, around, flew each sweet sound,
[2c] Then darted to the Sun;
[3a'] Slowly the sounds came back again,
[4a] Now mixed, now one by one.
[1a] Sometimes a-dropping from the sky
[2a] I heard the sky-lark sing;
[3a] Sometimes all little birds that are,
[3b] How they seem'd to fill the sea and air
[4a] With their sweet jargoning!
[1a] And now 'twas like all instruments,
[2b] Now like a lonely flute;
[3a] And now it is an angel's song,
[4a] That makes the Heavens be mute.
[1a] It ceased; yet still the sails made on
[2a] A pleasant noise till noon,
[3a] A noise like of a hidden brook
[4b] In the leafy month of June,
[3a] That to the sleeping woods all night
[4a'] Singeth a quiet tune.
[1a] Till noon we quietly sailed on,
[2c] Yet never a breeze did breathe:
[3a'] Slowly and smoothly went the ship,
[4a] Moved onward from beneath.
[1a'] Under the keel nine fathom deep,
[2a] From the land of mist and snow,
[3a] The spirit slid: and it was he
[4b] That made the ship to go.
[3a] The sails at noon left off their tune,
[4a] And the ship stood still also.
[1a] The Sun, right up above the mast,
[2a] Had fixed her to the ocean;
[3a] But in a minute she 'gan stir,
[4b] With a short uneasy motion—
[3a'] Backwards and forwards half her length,
[4a] With a short uneasy motion.
[1a] Then like a pawing horse let go,
[2a] She made a sudden bound:
[3a] It flung the blood into my head,
[4a] And I fell down in a swound.
[1a] How long in that same fit I lay,
[2a] I have not to declare;
[3a] But ere my living life returned,
[3b] I heard and in my soul discerned
[4a] Two voices in the air.
[1a] "Is it he?" quoth one, "Is this the man?
[2a] By him who died on cross,
[3a] With his cruel bow he laid full low,
[4a] The harmless Albatross.
[1a] The spirit who bideth by himself
[2a] In the land of mist and snow,
[3a] He loved the bird that loved the man
[4a] Who shot him with his bow."
[1a] The other was a softer voice,
[2a] As soft as honey-dew:
[3a] Quoth he, "The man hath penance done,
[4a] And penance more will do."
Part the sixth
[1a] But tell me, tell me! speak again,
[2a] Thy soft response renewing—
[3a] What makes that ship drive on so fast?
[4a] What is the ocean doing?
[1a'] Still as a slave before his lord,
[2a] The ocean hath no blast;
[3a] His great bright eye most silently
[4a'] Up to the Moon is cast—
[1a] If he may know which way to go;
[2a] For she guides him smooth or grim.
[3a] See, brother, see! how graciously
[4a] She looketh down on him.
[1a] But why drives on that ship so fast,
[2c] Without or wave or wind?
[3a] The air is cut away before,
[3a] And closes from behind.
[1a] Fly, brother, fly! more high, more high!
[2a] Or we shall be belated:
[3a] For slow and slow that ship will go,
[4a] When the Mariner's trance is abated."
[1a] I woke, and we were sailing on
[2a] As in a gentle weather:
[3a] 'Twas night, calm night, the moon was high;
[4a] The dead men stood together.
[1a] All stood together on the deck,
[2a] For a charnel-dungeon fitter:
[3a] All fixed on me their stony eyes,
[4a] That in the Moon did glitter.
[1a] The pang, the curse, with which they died,
[2b] Had never passed away:
[3a] I could not draw my eyes from theirs,
[4a] Nor turn them up to pray.
[1a] And now this spell was snapt: once more
[2a] I viewed the ocean green,
[3a] And looked far forth, yet little saw
[4a] Of what had else been seen—
[1a] Like one, that on a lonesome road
[2c] Doth walk in fear and dread,
[3a] And having once turn'd round, walks on,
[4b] And turns no more his head;
[3a] Because he knows, a frightful fiend
[4a] Doth close behind him tread.
[1a] But soon there breathed a wind on me,
[2a] Nor sound nor motion made:
[3a] Its path was not upon the sea,
[4a] In ripple or in shade.
[1a] It raised my hair, it fanned my cheek
[2a] Like a meadow-gale of spring—
[3a] It mingled strangely with my fears,
[4a] Yet it felt like a welcoming.
[1a'] Swiftly, swiftly flew the ship,
[2a] Yet she sailed softly too:
[3a'] Sweetly, sweetly blew the breeze—
[4a] On me alone it blew.
[1a] Oh! dream of joy! is this indeed
[2c] The light-house top I see?
[3a] Is this the hill? is this the kirk?
[4a] Is this mine own countree?
[1a] We drifted o'er the harbour-bar,
[2c] And I with sobs did pray—
[3a] O let me be awake, my God!
[4a] Or let me sleep alway.
[1a] The harbour-bay was clear as glass,
[2a] So smoothly it was strewn!
[3a] And on the bay the moonlight lay,
[4a] And the shadow of the Moon.
[1a] The rock shone bright, the kirk no less,
[2c] That stands above the rock:
[3a] The moonlight steeped in silentness
[4a] The steady weathercock.
[1a] And the bay was white with silent light,
[2b] Till rising from the same,
[3a] Full many shapes, that shadows were,
[4a] In crimson colours came.
[1a] A little distance from the prow
[2c] Those crimson shadows were:
[3a] I turned my eyes upon the deck—
[4a] Oh, Christ! what saw I there!
[1a] Each corse lay flat, lifeless and flat,
[2a] And, by the holy rood!
[3a] A man all light, a seraph-man,
[4a] On every corse there stood.
[1a] This seraph-band, each waved his hand:
[2b] It was a heavenly sight!
[3a] They stood as signals to the land,
[4a] Each one a lovely light:
[1a] This seraph-band, each waved his hand,
[2b] No voice did they impart—
[3a] No voice; but oh! the silence sank
[4a] Like music on my heart.
[1a] But soon I heard the dash of oars,
[2a] I heard the Pilot's cheer;
[3a] My head was turned perforce away,
[4a] And I saw a boat appear.
[1a] The Pilot, and the Pilot's boy,
[2c] I heard them coming fast:
[3a] Dear Lord in Heaven! it was a joy
[4a] The dead men could not blast.
[1a] I saw a third—I heard his voice:
[2a] It is the Hermit good!
[3a] He singeth loud his godly hymns
[4b] That he makes in the wood.
[3a] He'll shrieve my soul, he'll wash away
[4a] The Albatross's blood.
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[1a] This Hermit good lives in that wood
[2a] Which slopes down to the sea.
[3a] How loudly his sweet voice he rears!
[3b] He loves to talk with marineres
[4a] That come from a far countree.
[1a] He kneels at morn, and noon, and eve—
[2a] He hath a cushion plump:
[3a] It is the moss that wholly hides
[4a] The rotted old oak-stump.
[1a] The skiff-boat near'd: I heard them talk,
[2c] "Why, this is strange, I trow!
[3a] Where are those lights so many and fair,
[4a] That signal made but now?"
[1a] "Strange, by my faith!" the Hermit said—
[2b] "And they answered not our cheer!
[3a] The planks looked warped! and see those sails,
[4b] How thin they are and sere!
[3a] I never saw aught like to them,
[4a] Unless perchance it were
[1a] Brown skeletons of leaves that lag
[2a] My forest-brook along:
[3a] When the ivy-tod is heavy with snow,
[3b] And the owlet whoops to the wolf below,
[4a] That eats the she-wolf's young."
[1a] 'Dear Lord! it hath a fiendish look—
[2a] (The Pilot made reply)
[3a] I am a-feared—Push on, push on!
[4a] Said the Hermit cheerily.
[1a] The boat came closer to the ship,
[2a] But I nor spake nor stirred;
[3a] The boat came close beneath the ship,
[4a] And straight a sound was heard.
[1a'] Under the water it rumbled on,
[2c] Still louder and more dread:
[3a] It reached the ship, it split the bay;
[4a] The ship went down like lead.
[1a'] Stunned by that loud and dreadful sound,
[2c] Which sky and ocean smote,
[3a] Like one that hath been seven days drown'd
[4b] My body lay afloat;
[3a] But swift as dreams, myself I found
[4a] Within the Pilot's boat.
[1a] Upon the whirl, where sank the ship,
[2c] The boat spun round and round;
[3a] And all was still, save that the hill
[4a] Was telling of the sound.
[1a] I moved my lips—the Pilot shrieked
[2a] And fell down in a fit;
[3a] The holy Hermit raised his eyes,
[4a] And prayed where he did sit.
[1a] I took the oars: the Pilot's boy,
[2c] Who now doth crazy go,
[3a] Laughed loud and long, and all the while
[4b] His eyes went to and fro.
[3a] "Ha! ha!" quoth he, "full plain I see,
[4a] The Devil knows how to row."
[1a] And now, all in my own countree,
[2b] I stood on the firm land!
[3a] The Hermit stepped forth from the boat,
[4a] And scarcely he could stand.
[1a] "O shrieve me, shrieve me, holy man!"
[2a] The Hermit crossed his brow.
[3a] "Say quick," quoth he, "I bid thee say—
[4a] What manner of man art thou?'
[1a'] Forthwith this frame of mine was wrench'd
[2a] With a woeful agony,
[3a] Which forced me to begin my tale;
[4a] And then it left me free.
[1a] Since then, at an uncertain hour,
[2c] That agony returns:
[3a] And till my ghastly tale is told,
[4a] This heart within me burns.
[1a] I pass, like night, from land to land;
[2a] I have strange power of speech;
[3a] That moment that his face I see,
[3b] I know the man that must hear me:
[4a] To him my tale I teach.
[1a] What loud uproar bursts from that door!
[2a] The wedding-guests are there;
[3a] But in the garden-bower the bride
[4b] And bride-maids singing are;
[3a] And hark the little vesper bell,
[4a] Which biddeth me to prayer!
[1a] O Wedding-Guest! this soul hath been
[2b] Alone on a wide wide sea:
[3a] So lonely 'twas, that God himself
[4a] Scarce seemèd there to be.
[1a] O sweeter than the marriage-feast,
[2b] 'Tis sweeter far to me,
[3a] To walk together to the kirk
[4b] With a goodly company!—
[1a] To walk together to the kirk,
[2c] And all together pray,
[3a] While each to his great Father bends,
[3b] Old men, and babes, and loving friends,
[4a] And youths and maidens gay!
[1a] Farewell, farewell! but this I tell
[2b] To thee, thou Wedding-Guest!
[3a] He prayeth well, who loveth well
[4a] Both man and bird and beast.
[1a] He prayeth best, who loveth best
[2c] All things both great and small;
[3a] For the dear God who loveth us,
[4a] He made and loveth all.
[1a] The Mariner, whose eye is bright,
[2a] Whose beard with age is hoar,
[3a] Is gone: and now the Wedding-Guest
[4a'] Turned from the bridegroom's door.
[1a] He went like one that hath been stunned,
[2b] And is of sense forlorn:
[3a] A sadder and a wiser man,
[4a] He rose the morrow morn.
