Saturday, 22 June 2019

Deep love - quite possibly the last one :)

I already said just about all I need to say in this introduction to today's 深深的爱 | Shēnshēn de ài in the last post, except that I translated this one only to English, and mostly during the night between 22/3 and 23/3/19, after midnight, with a tweak the following morning and another one («blurred so much» -> «so confused») on recording day 29/4/23 at 14:46/47 while cutting the video. Wanting to record it next weekend, on 24/4/23 at 9:46-10:10 I make a rhyming remake. I show the original on the left, and the remake on the right. On 2/5/23, listening to the vid with mom, I notice that «Can't forget how I swore to love thee» comes out stressed weird. I honestly think I already noticed that earlier and thought of this change then, but anyway, at 19:51, I switch "love" and "to" as below. I'm talking about the rhyming remake, last section, l. 2. 4/5/23 10:16-10:17 «My deep love» becomes «My true love» and «I'll know those lands intimately» gains its «quite» which soon becomes «so» - all of that in the chorus of the rhyming remake. Let's see it!


微风阵阵吹
吹进我心底
一首情歌
我要送给你
不管你在哪里
依然想着你
它是代表我的心意

千言万语
藏在心坎里
一首情歌
我要送给你
不管海枯石烂
风云多变幻
我会永远深深爱你

虽然情爱多迷离
我对你的真情永不渝
不管你到海角天边
天涯芳草会知音

海风海浪明白我的心
山盟海誓难忘记
相逢梦中成追忆
心爱的你在哪里



There's a gentle breeze
Blowing in my heart
A song of love
I wanna send to you
"Wherever you may be,
I'm still missing you":
This expresses well what I feel

Thousands of words
Hidden in my heart
A song of love
I wanna send to you
When seas dry and stones rot
And the winds blow strong
I will always deeply love you

Though my love is so confused
My true feelings for you never move
When you reach the corners of the world
Grass from there will be my soulmate

Winds and waves can understand my heart
Cannot forget such a solemn oath
Dreamtime meetings turn to memories
My darling dear, where are you?
Wéifēng zhènzhèn chuī
Chuī jìn wǒ xīndǐ
Yī shǒu qínggē
Wǒ yào sòng gěi nǐ
Bù guǎn nǐ zài nǎlǐ
Yīrán xiǎngzhe nǐ
Tā shì dàibiǎo wǒ de xīnyì

Qiānyánwànyǔ
Cáng zài xīnkǎn lǐ
Yī shǒu qínggē
Wǒ yào sòng gěi nǐ
Bù guǎn hǎi kū shí làn
Fēngyún duō biànhuàn
Wǒ huì yǒngyuǎn shēnshēn ài nǐ

Suīrán qíng'ài duō mílí
Wǒ duì nǐ de zhēn qíng yǒng bù yú
Bù guǎn nǐ dào hǎijiǎo tiānbiān
Tiānyá fāngcǎo huì zhīyīn

Hǎifēng hǎilàng míngbái wǒ de xīn
Shānménghǎishì nán wàngjì
Xiāngféng mèng zhōng chéng zhuīyì
Xīn'ài de nǐ zài nǎlǐ



Gentle breeze doth blow
In my heart quietly,
A love song I
Wish to send to thee.
"Wherever you may be,
I'll still think of thee":
That shows what I feel so clearly!

Oh how many words
In my heart I keep!
A love song I
Wish to send to thee.
Though rocks rot and seas dry
And huge storms may be nigh,
I will always deeply love thee.

Though confusion's in my heart,
My true love from you will never part.
Though at the ends of the world you may be,
I'll know those lands so intimately!

Wind and waves know my heart deeply,
Can't forget how I swore love to thee.
Our dream meeting's just a memory:
My darling, where can you be?

Tuesday, 18 June 2019

Deep love - the return

Yes, we're back with that title, because the Chinese just can't get enough of songs with it :). After "I love you", a couple of "Deep love" (both in Mandarin, so 深深的爱 | Shēnshēn de ài) is a perfect fit. This one, I translated into English and Italian. I did the Italian wholly on 23/3/19 with a tweak the following morning, and the English soon afterwards, partly on 23 and partly on 24. Let's see them!


此心常相依
此情永不移
我心无所系
只有一个你

上有蓝蓝的天
下有青青的地
我们立下誓言
你只有我,我只有你

情要多回忆
爱要多珍惜
今生今世里
永远记得你



Siamo un solo cuor
Saldo è il nostro amor
Altri legami non ha il mio cuor
Ha te sola ognor

Su, c'è un cielo blu
Giù, c'è il nero suol
Noi promessi ci siam
Io avrò te sol, tu avrai me sol

Ricorda ben questo amor
Tienlo stretto al cuor
Nella vita mia ognor
Ti terrò nel cuor
Cǐ xīn cháng xiāngyī
Cǐ qíng yǒng bù yí
Wǒ xīn wú suǒ xì
Zhǐyǒu yī gè nǐ

Shàng yǒu lánlán de tiān
Xià yǒu qīngqīng de dì
Wǒmen lìxià shìyán
Nǐ zhǐyǒu wǒ, wǒ zhǐyǒu nǐ

Qíng yào duō huíyì
Ài yào duō zhēnxī
Jīnshēng jīnshì lǐ
Yǒngyuǎn jìdé nǐ



Our hearts beat as one
Our love will never be gone
My heart's formed no other bond
You're his only one

Up, the blue blue sky,
Down, black ground I see.
We have made a promise
I'd just have you, you'd just have me

Don't forget this care
Cherish the love we bear
In my whole life
Memory of you I'll bear

Saturday, 15 June 2019

I love you

Another love song today, but this time in Russian, я тебя люблю | ja tjebja ljublju, "I love you", which I found sometime in Spring or late Winter 2012 and translated to Hakka way later in the morning of Nov 18 2017.
Just to have it in at least one language I actually speak, I tried French. I started with a few random lines around 1:30 on 1/9/19, finished verse 1 and chorus around 3 on 2/9, and did verse 2 between 18:23 and 18:53, to then put it here around 2:30 on 3/9/19. [OK so, the line «Oui, mais la règle, c'est très facile, ma foi» originally started with "bon". The change is untraceable. When I first put the French in here, the line was accidentally replaced by an older version of the following line, namely «C’est bon pour moi c’qui l’est pour toi». Then, this mistake was fixed on 21/11/19 at 11:14, but I don't have a save of that edit, so I cannot presently tell if the "oui" version was there already. It was certainly there on 16/8/20, when I apparently only fixed the Russian transliteration after revising the scheme in the spelling and transliteration post, so I assume it was "oui" in that 2019 edit. Not sure when the change was made anyway.] I don't know where or when, but I read somewhere that "Je t'aime bien" actually means "I like you", not "I love you", so on 25/2/23, thinking about this, at 12:40 I change «Moi je t'aimė bien» to «Moi je t'aime beaucoup», I love you a lot.
To fill the column, I'll put in a literal English rendition that is not singable. I doubt I will try making a singable English version. Let's see it!


Мне говорят: "это просто игра,
И только сердце подскажет пора".
Готов секунды с тобою ловить,
Я никогда не смогу разлюбить.
И впереди неизвестен финал,
Лишь для того, кто всегда побеждал.
Но без игры не бывает побед,
Ты мне даёшь зелёный свет.

Припев:
Я тебя люблю
И нет сильнее слов,
Лечу к тебе из снов.
Да, для тебя на всё я готов.
Я тебя люблю
И формула проста,
Как с чистого листа,
Будем болеть за нашу любовь.

Перешагну через горы-моря,
В тебе и сила и слабость моя.
Я неготов никому проиграть,
Тебя одну я боюсь потерять.
Не узнаю сам себя я порой.
Быть может, это зовётся игрой.
Но эти правила очень просты.
Мне хорошо, когда есть ты.

Припев



有人讲说涯我知:“裡这净只系是游戏,
净只有若你(的)个的心会建议何时“。
佮跟汝你个的秒钟涯我毋不爱要失去,
涯我永远都毋不会停止爱汝你。
佮和在结束有未知的结尾:
净只系是为总已赢得个的自己。
但系但是无没游戏就毋得不能赢喔。
汝你会佮跟涯我开绿灯无吗?

副歌:
涯我真正爱汝你,
净只有里这句譮话好,
梦肚里飞向汝你喔:
为汝你涯我全都预备来做!
涯我真正爱汝你:
系是恁很该容易个的譮话话。
涯等我们重新开始啊
来为自家自己个的爱奋斗哦!

涯我就来在海佮和山顶走路,
汝你真正系是吾我的强弱个的全部。
涯我毋不预备来将么个什么赌博,
汝你系涯我净只害怕失去个的喔。
有时涯我哇甚至毋得不能认出自己:
可能人将裡这来喊着称为游戏。
但里这兜些规律就真正恁很该容易:
系汝你来好,涯我正才也来。

副歌



Les gens me disent que c'est juste comme jouer,
Et seul le coeur peut le temps décider
Chaque second avec toi j'veux passer
Je ne pourrai jamais te desaimer
Et bon, enfin, un final inconnu
Seulement pour moi qui toujour ai vaincu
Mais sans un jeu, y a pas d'victoire, c'est clair:
Est-ce que tu m'va donner feu vert?

Refrain:
Moi je t'aime beaucoup:
Y a pas d'autres mots pour ça
En rêves j'm'envole vers toi
Oui, je suis prêt à tout faire pour toi!
Moi je t'aime beaucoup,
C'est simple à expliquer:
Ayant effacé l' passé
Pour nôtre amour je vais lutter

Moi je m’en vais par montaignes et mers,
Faiblesse et force: tout en toi j’ai, ma chère.
Je n’suis pas prêt pour jouer avec quelqu’un,
C’est seulement de perdre toi que je crains.
Parfois pour moi-même je suis inconnu:
Est-il cela qui comme un jeu est vu?
Oui, mais la règle, c'est très facile, ma foi:
S’il te va bien, c’est bon pour moi.

Refrain
Mnĵe govorĵát: "Éto prósto igrá,
I tól'ko sĵérdcĵe podskážĵet porá".
Gotóv sĵekúndy s tobóĵu lovít',
Ĵa nikogdá nĵe smogú razlĵubít'.
I vpĵerĵedí nĵeisvĵéstĵen finál,
Liš' dlĵa toǵó, kto vsĵegdá pobĵeždál.
No bĵez igrý nĵe byváĵet pobĵéd,
Ty mnĵe daĵóš' zĵelĵónyj svĵet.

Pripĵév:
Ĵa tĵebĵá lĵublĵú
I nĵet síl'nĵeĵe slov,
Lĵećú k tĵebĵé iz snov.
Da, dlĵa tĵebĵá na vsĵó ĵa gotóv.
Ĵa tĵebĵá lĵublĵú
I fórmula prostá,
Kak s ćístoǵo listá,
Búdĵem bolĵét' za nášu lĵubóv'.

Pĵerĵešagnú ćĵérĵez góry-morĵá,
V tĵebĵé i síla i slávost' moĵá.
Ĵa nĵegotóv nikomú proigrát',
Tĵebĵá odnú ĵa boĵús' potĵerĵát'.
Nĵe uznaĵú sam sêbĵá ĵa porój.
Byt' móžĵet, éto zovĵótsĵa igrój.
No éti právila óćĵen' prostý.
Mnê khorošó, kogdá ĵest' ty.

Pripĵév



Yìu nyîn kóng ngâi ti: "Lia tshiàng hè yû-hì,
Tshiàng yìu nyia kài sim vòi kèn-nyî hô-shî".
Kak nyî kài miáu-cung ngâi m òi shit-khì,
Ngâi yún-yén tu m vòi thîn-cí òi nyî.
Kak tshoi ket-suk yìu vùi-ti kài ket-mi:
Tshiàng hè vùi tsúng yí yâng-tet kài tshìi-kí
Thàn-hè mô yû-hì tshìu m-tet yâng oh
Nyî vòi kak ngâi khoi liu̇k ten mô?

Fù-ko:
Ngai cin-kìn òi nyî,
Tshiàng yìu lî kì voi hó,
Mùng tú pui hiòng nyî oh:
Vùi nyî ngâi tshiên tu yì-phì lôi tsò!
Ngai cin-kìn òi nyî:
Hè àn koi kài voi-fà.
Ngâi-tén chûng-sin khoi-sé ah
Lôi vùi tshìi-ka kài òi fún-tèu oh

Ngâi tshìu lôi tshoi hói kak san táng tséu lù,
Nyî cin-kìn hè nga khiông-nyȯk kài tshiên-phù.
Ngâi m yì-phì lôi tsiong mak-kài tú-pok,
Nyî hè ngâi tshiàng hòi-phà shit-khì kài oh.
Yìu-shî ngâi và m-tet nyìn-tshut tshìi-kì:
Khó-nên nyîn tsiong lia lôi hàm tó yû-hì.
Thàn lî teu kwui-lu̇t tshìu cin-kìn àn koi:
Hè nyî lôi hó, ngâi cang ya lôi.

Fù-ko



They tell me: "This is just a game,
And only the heart will tell the time".
I'm ready to catch (all my) seconds with you,
I will never be able to fall out of love.
And in the end, an unknown ending,
Just for me, who have always won.
But without a game, there cannot happen a victory.
Will you give me green light?

Chorus:
I love you,
And there are no better words,
I fly towards you in dreams,
Yes, for you I'm ready for everything!
I love you,
And it's a simple formula:
As from a blank sheet (i.e. making tabula rasa),
I will fight for our love.

I walk through mountains and seas,
In you are both my strength and my weakness.
I am not ready to gamble with anyone,
You alone I fear to lose.
I don't recognize myself at times:
Maybe this is what they call a game?
But these rules are very simple:
I'm fine, when you're fine.

Chorus

Tuesday, 11 June 2019

Ti amo, mio angelo | I love you, my angel

Con lo scorso post abbiamo dato avvio a una serie di canzoni d'amore, e quindi la canzone in Swahili di oggi, Malaika, ci sta a pennello. L'ho trovata, nella versione del video, come sottofondo in un film, ho subito capito che era in una lingua Bantù, poi l'ho Shazammata e ho scoperto il titolo, dopodiché ho tirato giù il testo dal video, con non pochi punti di semi-incomprensibilità che ho chiarito con la mia "correttrice" :). Nel frattempo, il 18/4/19 alle 22:27 mentre guardavo il suddetto film, avevo tradotto la prima riga in Cinese ed Italiano, e quindi il 27/5 tra mezzanotte e l'una ho finito il Cinese, mentre la mattina dopo intorno a mezzogiorno e mezzo ho finito l'Italiano.
Il testo che do in Swahili è stato corretto da una parlante nativa, quindi dovrebbe essere corretto. Per qualche bizzarra ragione abbiamo:
  • Una N scomparsa, che indico con Ǹ;
  • Parecchie N che sembrano H, che indico con ń;
  • Svariate i che sembrano e, che segno con ï;
  • E il meglio è il nami che sembra yamua/yamwa.
Le riduzioni vocaliche che si possono trovare nel video ho deciso di non segnarle, anche perché potrebbero semplicemente essere delle vocali posteriori invece che centrali come le a italiane. O forse Harry Belafonte ha un accento inglese onde le riduzioni. Le j sono pronunciate come g dolci, tranne quelle coll'accento che sono delle g dure palatalizzate e implosive (preglottalizzate). Le r dovrebbero essere italiane, anche se i cantanti del video le fanno inglesi.
L'interazione con la nativa ha prodotto sostanzialmente una correzione: da «Ti sposerei, tesoro mio» (丰富我想与你结婚) a «Se io non fossi povero» (如果我不这么贫乏) e poi «Se più ricco fossi io». Nel Cinese sono anche indipendentemente andato anche da «姐妹想与你结婚» a «就与你结婚,姐妹», correzioni delle ~19:59 del 29/5/19. Queste discendono dal cambiamento di Ningekuoa in Ningekuwa nel corrispondente Swahili. L'analisi è stata trasferita al blog di decifrazioni. Vediamo mo' le traduzioni!
With the last post we started a series of love songs, so the Swahili song we have today, Malaika, fits perfectly. I found it, in the video's version, as background music in a movie, I understood straightaway it was in a Bantu language, then I Shazammed it and I found out the title, then I got the lyrics off a video, with not few points of semi-incomprehensibility I clarified with my "corrector" :). In the meantime, on 18/4/19 at 22:27 while I watched the above-mentioned movie, I had translated the first line to Chinese and Italian, so on 27/5 between midnight and 1am I finished the Chinese, while the following morning around half past midday I finished the Italian.
The text I give in Swahili has been corrected by a native speaker, so it should be correct. For some bizarre reason we have:
  • A vanished N, which I denote Ǹ;
  • Several Ns that sound like Hs, which I denote Ń;
  • A good number of i's that sound like e's, which I denote ï;
  • And the best thing is the nami which sounds like yamua/yamwa.
The vowel reductions that can be found in the video I decided not to mark, also because they could just be back vowels instead of central vowels like the Italian a. Or maybe Harry Belafonte has an English accent whence the reductions. The j's are pronounced the English way, except the ones with the accent mark which are palatalized hard and implosive (preglottalized) English g's. The r's should be Italian (rolled) r's, though the singers in the video make them English-style.
The interaction with the native has produced essentially one correction: from «Ti sposerei, tesoro mio» (丰富我想与你结婚) to «Se io non fossi povero» (如果我不这么贫乏) and then «Se più ricco fossi io». Independently, in the Chinese, I also went from «姐妹想与你结婚» to «就与你结婚,姐妹», corrections dating to ~19:59 on 29/5/19. These descend from the change of Ningekuoa to Ningekuwa in the matching Swahili. The analysis was transferred to the decipherment blog. Let's now see the translations!


Malaika, nakupenda malaika
Malaika, nakupenda malaika
Ǹïngekuwa mali we,
Ńïngekuoa dada
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika

Pesa zasumbua roho yangu,
Pesa zasumbua roho yangu,
Nami nifanyeje,
Kij́ana mwenzio,
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoå malaika

Kidege, ńakuwaza kidege
Kidege, ńakuwaza kidege
Ńïngekuwa mali we
Ńïngekuoa dada
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Hengekuoa malaika

Malaika, nakupenda malaika
Malaika, nakupenda malaika
Ńïngekuwa mali we
Ńïngekuoa dada
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika
Nashindwa na mali sina we,
Ńïngekuoa malaika



哦天使我真爱你哦天使
哦天使我真爱你哦天使
如果我不这么贫乏
就与你结婚,姐妹
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使

金钱总都折磨我的灵魂
金钱总都折磨我的灵魂
但我要做什么,
你年轻的朋友
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使

我小鸟,我想到你,我小鸟
我小鸟,我想到你,我小鸟
如果我不这么贫乏
就与你结婚,姐妹
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使

哦天使我真爱你哦天使
哦天使我真爱你哦天使
如果我不这么贫乏
就与你结婚,姐妹
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使
丰富的缺乏来打败我
想与你结婚哦天使
Mio angelo, io ti amo, mio angelo
Mio angelo, io ti amo, mio angelo
Se più ricco fossi,
Ti sposerei, sorella
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo

I soldi mi tormentano l’anima
I soldi mi tormentano l’anima
Ma io che dovrei far,
Tuo giovane amico?
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo

Uccellino, io ti penso, mio uccellino
Uccellino, io ti penso, mio uccellino
Se più ricco fossi,
Ti sposerei, sorella
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo

Mio angelo, io ti amo, mio angelo
Mio angelo, io ti amo, mio angelo
Se più ricco fossi,
Ti sposerei, sorella
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo
Son sopraffatto dalla povertà
Ti sposereï mio angelo



Ó tiānshǐ wǒ zhēn'ài nǐ ó tiānshǐ
Ó tiānshǐ wǒ zhēn'ài nǐ ó tiānshǐ
Rúguǒ wǒ bù zhème pínfá
Jiù yǔ nǐ jiéhūn, jiěmèi
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ

Jīnqián zǒng dōu zhémó wǒ de línghún
Jīnqián zǒng dōu zhémó wǒ de línghún
Dàn wǒ yào zuò shénme,
Nǐ niánqīng de péngyǒu
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ

Wǒ xiǎo niǎo, wǒ xiǎng dào nǐ, wǒ xiǎo niǎo
Wǒ xiǎo niǎo, wǒ xiǎng dào nǐ, wǒ xiǎo niǎo
Rúguǒ wǒ bù zhème pínfá
Jiù yǔ nǐ jiéhūn, jiěmèi
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ

Ó tiānshǐ wǒ zhēn'ài nǐ ó tiānshǐ
Ó tiānshǐ wǒ zhēn'ài nǐ ó tiānshǐ
Rúguǒ wǒ bù zhème pínfá
Jiù yǔ nǐ jiéhūn, jiěmèi
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ
Fēngfù de quēfá lái dǎbài wǒ
Xiǎng yǔ nǐ jiéhūn ó tiānshǐ

Saturday, 8 June 2019

Really love you

We keep on our love theme with a Mandarin song, 我是真的爱上你 | Wǒ shì zhēnde àishàng nǐ, "I'm really in love with you", which I met sometime between October and Christmas 2013 and translated to English soon after that, I guess, but definitely within that schoolyear. Nah, just kidding, I only translated it on 9/1/18, partly around 00:30, partly around 10:29. Then at some point between May 7 and May 9 2019 I saw a Hakka Verse post with Ånton Xiè's Hakka version, and decided to include it below. Let's see them translations!


你有一双会说话的眼睛
你有善解人意的心
不知天高地厚的我
你的微笑
总是让我为你着迷

*你有一双深情的眼睛
你有融化冰雪的魔力
从来不敢奢求的我
你的美丽总是让我
躲不过去

@什么原因你的法像
总挥之不去
我的世界什么时候
开始昼夜难分
翻天覆地来去
都是因为想你      哦

# 我偷偷的爱上你
却不敢告诉你
因为我知道
我给不到你要的东西      哦
我只能偷偷的想你
只能偷偷看着你
总是没勇气
总说不出
我是真的爱上你

*

@

#

#(高一个全音)



汝你有一双会尽摄闪烁个的目珠眼睛
汝你有善良对人个的心
毋不知天高地深个的涯我
若你(的)个的微笑恬总会搣叫涯我
对汝你狂迷

汝你有一双深情个的目珠眼睛
汝你有融忒了白雪个的神力
从来毋不敢多求个的涯我
若你(的)个的美丽恬总会搣叫涯我
闪毋不过去

系是么什么原因若你(的)个的毛香
恬总毋不肯离开
吾我(的)个的世界系是么什么时候
开始昼暗昼夜难分
翻天覆地来去
都系是因为想汝你

哦……喔……喔……哦……
偷偷仰地爱着到汝你
就毋不敢讲说汝你知
因为涯我都知
涯我毋不晓能分给汝你爱要个的东西
哦……喔……喔……哦……
争只晓能偷偷仰地想汝你
争只晓能偷偷看等着汝你
恬总无没遐那胆水勇气
恬总讲说毋不出
涯我是正经真真爱着到汝你
Nǐ yǒu yī shuāng huì shuō huà de yǎnjīng
Nǐ yǒu shànjiě rényì de xīn
Bù zhī tiān gāo dì hòu de wǒ
Nǐ de wéixiào
Zǒngshì ràng wǒ wèi nǐ zháomí

* Nǐ yǒu yī shuāng shēnqíng de yǎnjīng
Nǐ yǒu rónghuà bīngxuě de mólì
Cónglái bù gǎn shēqiú de wǒ
Nǐ de měili zǒngshì ràng wǒ
Duǒ bù guòqù

@Shénme yuányīn nǐ de fǎxiàng
Zǒng huīzhībùqù
Wǒ de shìjiè shénme shíhou
Kāishǐ zhòuyè nánfēn
Fāntiānfùdì lái qù
Dōu shì yīnwèi xiǎng nǐ      ó

# Wǒ tōutōu de àishàng nǐ
Què bù gǎn gàosu nǐ
Yīnwèi wǒ zhīdào
Wǒ gěi bù dào nǐ yào de dōngxi      ó
Wǒ zhǐ néng tōutōu de xiǎng nǐ
Zhǐ néng tōutōu kànzhe nǐ
Zǒngshì méi yǒngqì
Zǒng shuō bu chū
Wǒ shì zhēn de àishàng nǐ

*

@

#

# (Gāo yī ge quányīn)



Nyî yìu yit sung vòi chín-nyiȧp kài muk-cu
Nyî yìu shàn-liông tùi nyîn kài sim
M ti thian ko thì chim kài ngâi
Nyia kài mî-siàu tiam vòi met ngâi
Tùi nyî không-mî

Nyî yìu yit sung chim tshîn kài muk-cu
Nyî yìu yûng het phȧk-siet kài shîn-lıt
Tshûng-lôi m kám to khîu kài ngâi
Nyia kài mui-lì tiam vòi met ngâi
Sám m kò-hì

Hè māi nyiên-yin nyia kài mô-hiong
Tiam m hén lî-khoi
Nga kài shè-kài hè māi shî-hèu
Khoi-hí cìu àm nân fun
Fan-thien-phuk-thì lôi hì
Tu hè yin-vùi sióng nyî

Woo...oo...oo..woo...
Theu-theu-nyòng òi tó nyî
Tshìu m kám kóng nyî ti
Yin-vùi ngâi tu ti
Ngâi m hiáu pun nyî òi kài tung-si
Woo...oo...oo..woo...
Tshiàng hiáu theu-theu-nyòng sióng nyî
Tshiàng hiáu theu-theu khòn-tén nyî
Tiam mô ka tám-shúi
Tiam kóng m chut
Ngâi shì cìn-kin òi tó nyî



You have eyes that for themselves can speak words
And a heart that understands the world
I who my limits do not know
I just always get enchanted
By you sweet smile

* You have eyes filled with the deepest feelings
You have charm to make the snow melt down
I never make absurd requests
Your great beauty makes it so that
I can never hide

@ Why is it that I can never
Get rid of your face?
When was it that
In my world
Night and day got mixed up
And all turned upside down?
That’s all ‘cause I love you      Oh…

# I secretly love you
But I dare not tell you
Because well I know
I cannot give you what you wish for      Oh…
I can but secretly love you
Can but secretly look at you
I just never dare
Can never say
I am really in love with you!

*

@

#

# (1 tone higher)

Tuesday, 4 June 2019

The power of love

As we saw two posts ago, love can work wonders, and this is what today's Hokkien song 爱情的力量 | Ài-tsîng ê li̍k-liōng, "The power of love", is all about. I met with it during the Easter holidays of 2012 and translated it to English soon after that. Once again, after this fucking restart for no reason that lost almost all of the edit to this which I had almost completed, there is a bit of a complication to this song.
  1. I translated it to English during English class on 16/4/12, between Tsí-ū lí and Wàng bù liǎo, giving the original version, reported exactly as it is in the notebook, corrections and all;
  2. Then, as per the big introduction I will soon edit into The history of my translations, I lost the translation and remade it on 26/7, writing it by hand on what is presumably a printout of the 28/7/12 11:01 file's part for Chinese; I'm pretty sure that is the file I printed on 25/7 to write translations on, and the 28/7 edit is to add Japanese songs at the end; this gives us the 2012 remake;
  3. Then I presumably recovered the translation and drew inspiration from it only to change «too» to «as well» in l. 4; the first file the translation appears in (the left-hand version) is from 18/8/12 15:27, giving us almost the 2012-2018 remake, we have just the changes I listed in the old intro to this post: «"Drop the fight" was because the captions had a character for the "koh" in "koh-tsai" that meant "stop", I fixed that somewhere between 21:16 of 18/8/12 and 3/9/12 13:25. While writing this draft on Sep 5 2018, I realized that, with my horrible Min back in the days, I had mistranslated a couple of lines, and changed «Not just future’ll be changèd / All laugh at you, no way t’ go» to «Not just your future will be changed / All laugh at you that there's no point» around 18»;
  4. Then, «on 24/6/21 at 13:05 I think I may better rework the whole thing, and start at 13:06 by changing «Get out courage, fight again!» to «Be a brave man, fight again!». At 1:01 of 27/6/21, I then start continuing, after a substantial update to this intro. I change the «grieves for lovẻ» lines at 1:02, the madness line at 1:03, «Not just your future will be changed / All laugh at you that there's no point» at 1:19, «Who has no ideals? / Who has not a pain?» at 1:19 (about 1/2min after the previous change), and «Feeling in the heart sorrow» at 1:20»; this gives us the final version below;
  5. Finally, to not have to choose between splitting the many translations over two columns or having to re-center the English, I translated this to Italian between 12:08 and 12:11 of 20/2/22; as I record it on 17/9/22, at 12:44 I realize «Non cambia solo il futuro, / Ma che importa se tutti ridono di te?» doesn't really fit the tune, so I make the below version; at 0:32 the following night, I abolish «Anche un eroe per amore può penar» to keep the partial repetition of the previous line in this one; eevn later that night, at 1:22, I change «Chi non sogna mai? / Chi non soffre mai?» to the current form.
By the way, the song also has a Mandarin version which I bumped into in summer 2017 while looking for the video to put in the Chinese song post. Anyways, let's see our song!


爱情的力量
小卒仔小人物有时也会变英雄
爱情的力量
英雄也会为情来悲伤
为情来悲伤
为情来反常
不但前途受影响
人人笑你无路用没有用
啥人谁无理想
啥人谁无苦衷
忍着痛苦在心中
提出勇气搁再再次衝
Love has such great might
Even a pawn a hero can become
Lhsgm
Heroes as well can for love get to grievesorrow find
For love get to grievesorrow find
For love madness find
Not just future’ll be changèd
All laugh at you, no way t’ go
Who has no ideals?
" has not a pain?
Feeling in the heart sorrow
Get out courage, drop the fight!
Love has such great might
Even [a] pawn a hero can become
Love has such great might
Heroes too can for love get to grieve
For love get to grieve
For love madness fin[d]
Not just future’ll be changèd
All laugh at you, no way t’ go
Who has no ideals?
Who has not a pain?
Feeling in the heart sorrow
Get out courage, drop the fight!
Love has such great might
Even a pawn a hero can become
Love has such great might
Heroes as well can for love get to grieve
For love get to grieve
For love madness find
Not just your future will be changèd
All laugh at you that there's no point!
Who has no ideals?
Who has not a pain?
Feeling in the heart sorrow
Get out courage, fight again!
Love has such great might
Even a pawn a hero can become,
Love has such great might
Even a hero sometimes grieves for love.
Sometimes grieves for love,
Turns all mad for love,
Your life will change, but not just that:
There's no point in others' laughs!
Who can have no goals?
Who can have no toils?
Though in your heart you feel pain,
Be a brave man, fight again!
Ài-tsîng--ê li̍k-liōng
Sió tsut-á ū-sî iā ē piàn ing-hiông
Ài-tsîng--ê li̍k-liōng
Ing-hiông iā ē uī tsîng lâi pi-siong
Uī tsîng lâi pi-siong
Uī tsîng lâi huán-siông
Put-tān tsiân-tôo siū íng-hióng
Lâng-lâng tshiò lí bô-lōo-iōng
Siánn-lâng bô lí-sióng
Siánn-lâng bô khóo-thiong
Lím-tio̍h thòng-khóo tsāi sim tiong
Thê-tshut ióng-khì koh-tsài tshiong





Forte è inver l'amor:
Perfino un fante eroe può diventar!
Forte è inver l'amor:
Anche un eroe può per amor penar!
Per amor penar,
E pazzo diventar.
Non cambia solo il futuro,
Che importa se tutti ridon di te?
Chi è che non sogna mai?
Chi è che non soffre mai?
Pur con dolore grande in cuore,
Lotta ancor, coraggiō, dài!

Saturday, 1 June 2019

The things that I see

Talking about wonders, today we leave love for a second, and see a blind man overwhelmed by wonder and a rollercoaster of emotions after being given his eyesight which he had never had, in an English song called The things that I see, which I translated during a bout of insomnia in the night between 30/8/18 and 31/8, except for a couple things I did the following morning, then I made a couple fixes that morning and one in the afternoon, then on 3/9/18 I posted on Quora about an uncertainty I had about a line of the translation, and Mr. Zhang chimed in and I ended up posting the original version below in the comments (with an alternate option «见到的事情 / 让我笑得就像孩子! / 见到的事情 / 让我哭得像男人!» for the first half of the chorus, and with the uncertainty fixed as per the answer, whereas the below version will have «直到泼剌洗走了黑暗» and my other idea at the time was «一溅水就洗走了黑暗») and he gave me a number of corrections which I implemented in the final version which I uploaded to Youtube just the afternoon before I wrote this draft, 4/9/18. Now that we're through with the story time, let's see this song!
Oh, and HAPPY SECOND BIRTHDAY BLOG!


Chorus:
The things that I see
Got me laughin' like a baby
The things that I see
Got me cryin' like a man
The things that I see
I can look at what he gave me
And he's gonna show me
Even more than I see

Just the other day
I heard a new voice in the darkness
Sending me away
With mud on my face
I heard the people say
He's crazy and he's hopeless
Till a splash washed the darkness away

Chorus

Making me explain
To a lot of angry faces
Talking to 'em plain
They don't hear what I say
Telling me again
He's a sinner and he's reckless
But there's only one thing I can say

Chorus

He came to me again
And this time I could see him
Told me how he'd been
Out looking for me
He told me to believe
I said what should I believe in
He said keep on believing in me

Chorus



副歌:
见到的事情
让我就像孩子笑啊
见到的事情
让我像男人哭泣
见到的事情,
我能看到他已给我的!
而他就会让我
能够看到更多!

一些天以前
黑暗里听到新的声音
我脸上有泥膏
他就来发送我
我听到人说:
他发狂得不可救药
直到泼剌洗走了黑暗

副歌

有生气的人
很多的脸问个解释
我说得清楚,
他们听不到我
他们再次说
他只是鲁莽的罪人
我却只能够来这样说:

副歌

他再次向我来
我却这次看得到他
他就告诉我
他已正寻找我
他就请我相信,
我说“我该相信于什么?”
他说“请继续相信于我!”

副歌
Fùgē:
Jiàn dào de shìqíng
Ràng wǒ jiùxiàng háizi xiào a
Jiàn dào de shìqíng
Ràng wǒ xiàng nánrén kūqì
Jiàn dào de shìqíng,
Wǒ néng kàn dào tā yǐ gěi wǒ de!
Ér tā jiù huì ràng wǒ
Nénggòu kàn dào gèng duō!

Yī xiē tiān yǐqián
Hēi'àn lǐ tīng dào xīn de shēngyīn
Wǒ liǎn shàng yǒu nígāo
Tā jiù lái fāsòng wǒ
Wǒ tīng dào rén shuō:
Tā fākuáng dé bù kě jiùyào
Zhídào pōlá xǐzǒule hēi'àn

Fùgē

Yǒu shēngqì de rén
Hěn duō de liǎn wèn gè jiěshì
Wǒ shuō dé qīngchǔ,
Tāmen tīng bù dào wǒ
Tāmen zàicì shuō
Tā zhǐ shì lǔmǎng de zuìrén
Wǒ què zhǐ nénggòu lái zhèyàng shuō:

Fùgē

Tā zàicì xiàng wǒ lái
Wǒ què zhè cì kàn de dào tā
Tā jiù gàosù wǒ
Tā yǐ zhèng xúnzhǎo wǒ
Tā jiù qǐng wǒ xiāngxìn,
Wǒ shuō “Wǒ gāi xiāngxìn yú shénme?”
Tā shuō “Qǐng jìxù xiāngxìn yú wǒ!”

Fùgē
副歌:
见到的事情
让我像个孩子笑啊
见到的事情
让我像男人哭泣
见到的事情,
我能看到他已给我的!
而他就会让我
能够看到更多!

一些天以前
黑暗里传出新的声音
脸上涂了泥膏
他就差遣我去
我听到人说:
他发狂得不可救药
直到水花冲淡了黑暗

副歌

对怒气的人
只能一再地去辩解
我说得清楚,
他们听不到我
他们再次说
他只是鲁莽的罪人
我却只能够来这样说:

副歌

他再次向我来
我却这次看得到他
他就告诉我
他已在寻找我
他请我相信,
我说“我该相信什么?”
他说“请你继续相信我!”

副歌
Fùgē:
Jiàn dào de shìqíng
Ràng wǒ xiàng gè háizi xiào a
Jiàn dào de shìqíng
Ràng wǒ xiàng nánrén kūqì
Jiàn dào de shìqíng,
Wǒ néng kàn dào tā yǐ gěi wǒ de!
Ér tā jiù huì ràng wǒ
Nénggòu kàn dào gèng duō!

Yī xiē tiān yǐqián
Hēi'àn lǐ chuán chū xīn de shēngyīn
Liǎn shàng túle nígāo
Tā jiù chāiqiǎn wǒ qù
Wǒ tīng dào rén shuō:
Tā fākuáng dé bù kě jiùyào
Zhídào shuǐhuā chōngdànle hēi'àn

Fùgē

Duì nùqì de rén
Zhǐ néng yīzài de qù biànjiě
Wǒ shuō dé qīngchǔ,
Tāmen tīng bù dào wǒ
Tāmen zàicì shuō
Tā zhǐ shì lǔmǎng de zuìrén
Wǒ què zhǐ nénggòu lái zhèyàng shuō:

Fùgē

Tā zàicì xiàng wǒ lái
Wǒ què zhè cì kàn de dào tā
Tā jiù gàosù wǒ
Tā yǐ zài xúnzhǎo wǒ
Tā qǐng wǒ xiāngxìn,
Wǒ shuō “Wǒ gāi xiāngxìn shénme?”
Tā shuō “Qǐng nǐ jìxù xiāngxìn wǒ!”

Fùgē